@rae
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 6 months ago
Hallelujah! Baron is saved! 🥹😃🥳 It’s so beautiful!
Does this story feel preachy?
Did Baron’s redemption feel legit?
It felt legit and not at all preachy!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 6 months ago
YAY!!!!!
Oh man!! That really got to me!!!
I am someone who loves large chunks of scripture in stories, but if it feels too long maybe break it up a little and have shorter passages with some “…” filling the sections that don’t directly pertain to the story.
YES! It felt very legit!
One of my favorite!!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
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Andrew replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
Lord Quackers would love to conqueror this castle, lol
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Andrew replied to the topic Potato news 64 in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
I plead the 5th
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
@highscribeofaetherium @jonas and @rae
you two…your characters somehow ALWAYS hated each other and wanted to kill each other…
THE DRAMA that always happened when us four were together in an RP hahaha -
SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
@jonas @highscribeofaetherium @rae @beth-torres @trailblazer
GUYS DO YOU REMEMBER THIS *cries*
h ttps://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/character-party/page/201/
I was laughing so harddd
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
@rae @jonas @highscribeofaetherium
do you guys remember this RP *cries*
I read through a good chunk of it and I was laughing so hard!!!
Our RP’s always ended in utter chaos lolllDoes anyone remember Compound Fracture 🤣😂😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
Also go to this page
@esther-c @freed_and_redeemed @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @ellette-giselle
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @grcr @ellette-giselle @savannah_grace2009 @keilah-h @trailblazer @hybridlore @rae @anyone-else-idk-lol
Possible (probable) scene for Book #2 of my fantasy series idea🤭
let me know what y’all think👀
The Mercenary camp seemed naught much fond of having guests.
Couldn’t they at the very least be w…
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Andrew replied to the topic How do you want to improve? in the forum Topic of the Week 1 year, 6 months ago
Basically all @rae said, but mostly writing more, because I haven’t written anything recently…
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Enid replied to the topic How do you want to improve? in the forum Topic of the Week 1 year, 6 months ago
Tagging some people to make them aware of this area on KP!
@mineralizedwritings @savannah_grace2009 @linus-smallprint @ellette-giselle @freed_and_redeemed @rae @godlyfantasy12 @theshadow @princesachronicle22
Y’all are also free to answer last week’s question if you like.
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Ellette Giselle posted an update 1 year, 6 months ago
Hey, I’m looking to get a job as a developmental editor/proofreader. Would I be allowed to reference The Baron Chronicles as one of the things I worked on? I can give the full title and your name, or I could do something like TBC by ____ (whatever name you want me to use, etc.
If not, that’s totally fine. I’m just looking for things I’ve…[Read more] -
SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ started the topic PLEASE TEAR THIS APART–URGENT CRITIQUES NEEDED in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
@esther-c @ellette-giselle @whalekeeper @loopylin @jonas @highscribeofaetherium @raxforge @rae @freed_and_redeemed @hybridlore @elishavet-pidyon @koshka @theducktator @theshadow @the_lost-journal @trailblazer @keilah-h @anyone-else-i’m-blanking
I’m doing something drastic.
Something crazy.
I suppose I shall start at the beginning…
Our youth…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
@rae Aww Chase 🙁 The twins would have visited him in the hospital, but they didn’t know that he was there and they didn’t have much time to wonder about him.
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TheShadow replied to the topic Couple RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
@keilah-h @rae @theducktator @kyronthearcanin@princesachronicles22
Trevor
Trevor hid a smile while watching Fairy and Silvanus. Next to him, Azalea tapped him on the shoulder and he glanced over. “What’s up?”
“It’s getting late, we should head back to the cabins.”
Trevor nodded, standing up with her. “Azalea and I are going to sleep now, go…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 6 months ago
@rae awww cute kitty. And if that’s you in the picture, you’re pretty too!
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Enid replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 6 months ago
It’s funny… your shadowed eyes remind me of me. 😆 How many kitties do you have right now?
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Enid replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 6 months ago
Is that a partial face reveal I see? 🫢
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Enid replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 6 months ago
WOW!! Those are awesome!
Thx! 😊 I’m trying to get comfortable with the line of action and forming the mass of the figure around it. It should make my art easier to look at. That’s what they say… Must… get better… *Eye twitches*
I guess Pinterest is the place to go, then. XD
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No pressure at all if you would rather not.
That’s totally fine with me! I also double-checked with my Mom, and she said it was okay.
The name I will be publishing is Ruth A. Eisele. Let me know if you need help with anything else, I’d be glad to help 🙂
Okay, this will be advertised online on a web page. (Just a heads up if I didn’t make that clear)
How would you like me to do the title? The full title or just the initials?
Thank you so much, btw!!
The full title is fine.
np!
Awesome! Thank you!