Ruth

@savannah_grace2009 @rae

Ugh! I forgot about this today. Sorry! I’ll get to it as soon as I can!

@rae

Nice! I like it.

Note this typo:

Furious, with leader of the caravan

I think you meant “the” instead of “with.”

Maybe also establish who the POV character is sooner. I was a bit confused for the first few paragraphs because I couldn’t tell.

The only other thing I would say is that the title could be tweaked. The name doesn’t feel quite…[Read more]

@rae

Yeah, I noticed the same thing as Freedom. It did get a little confusing. But overall it’s really good!

@rae

Oooh I like it!

@rae

yeah, sorry, My brain kinda died.

No, you’re fine. XD

Fynn

Fynn shoved his hands into his pockets as they fell into an awkward silence. Thankfully, he didn’t have to come up with anything to say as he saw Callista by the front doors standing next to a girl with blue hair and horse of the same color.

“Hey, Callie!”

She looked up and smi…[Read more]

@keilah-h

You can do a lot of things with an AI, but it depends on the model, and how you phrase a lot of things. I had to phrase it as a “game” for ChatGPT, otherwise it would say that it doesn’t have opinions, and I had to tell it to not list different views, because the point is to pit two different views against one another. GPT is also quite…[Read more]

@rae

lol 😅 I’ve been making characters since 2017, but the 335+ are from the last four years.

@euodia-vision @freedomwriter76

I forget too. XD We can just pretend Ami and Clint have met up with Bucky and Riya already, if you guys are ok with that.

@rae

(btw, Fynn and Lukas are friends, not brothers. 😉 Sorry I didn’t explain that earlier. 😅)

Fynn

“Thanks. I-I’m from Shyton.” Chase paused for a moment. “You?”

“Huh, never heard of Shyt…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009 @euodia-vision @jonas @rae

Do it lol

😆

h ttps://www.mote.com/m/darsdx5 (delete the space after the h)

Let me know if it doesn’t work.

@savannah_grace2009

I love it so far! The prose is beautiful, and the story is so good!

Yay! I’m glad!

@esther-c

Oh yeah ofc. I saw the post and I was like, “Welp, Euodia will probably want to hear all about this.” 😂

Haha, you know me very well. 😂

@rae

I think Andy should have gotten an award for how well he played Gollum.

AGREED!!!

@rae

There’s twelve, not seven planets, but that can be easily edited so it’s not a problem.

@savannah_grace2009 @rae

I know. I’ll try to write something tomorrow.

@rae

Awww thanks!

@rae

Cumberbatch is just one of a very select few actors I actually know the names of, in most cases I’d be clueless, lol!

@savannah_grace2009 @jonas @rae

This is making me want to share audio samples, lol!

I didn’t know about the Gollum juice, but it makes sense. Smaug was played by Benedict Cumberbatch.

@rae

I consider myself pretty good, but a friend of mine can actually shown the banter between Sméagol and Gollum, both in voice and facial expression.

@rae

Fynn

“N-no, n-not really. Not yet anyways. ” Chase removed his hood, revealing a head of dark hair and eyes with pitch black iris’s. He gave the two boys a wobbly smile.

“Woah,” Fynn said. “Your eyes are so cool! Where are you from?”

Lukas elbowed him in the gut.

“What? I think they’re cool.”

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@rae @euodia-vision

Speaking of playing Gollum well, who thinks they can do a really good Gollum voice?

@highscribeofaetheirum @jonas @rae @savannah_grace2009

Kian

Kian crossed his arms watching the chaos unfold before him. These people really couldn’t get along, could they? At least nobody had died yet. Kian hated watching others die… if it weren’t for a… good cause.

He rolled his eyes, watching two of them argue over whether one was lying or…[Read more]

@euodia-vision @thearcaneaxiom @highscribeofaetherium @rae

Sorry, guys, I just now saw this, KP is ridiculous with notifications lol 😂