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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 4 days, 2 hours ago
@rae that was awesome!
“Finally a fellow you like, and he’s a possible assassin.” Dr. Handel shook his head. “I will never understand a girls’ attractions.
Neither do I, and I’m a girl who the only fellow she likes is a (fortunately fictional) assassin too, apparently.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 4 days, 3 hours ago
I will be more annoyed if you save people who need to die for character arc or story purposes.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 4 days, 4 hours ago
and Baron goes for it. 🤣🤣 that was the bluntest declaration of love I’ve seen in a while. 😆
Good section. One of your best, honestly. I’m starting to really feel your characters!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 days, 21 hours ago
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whaley started the topic Topic of the Week…? in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 days, 23 hours ago
So, Topic of the Week! Do we want to start it up again somehow? Please discuss here – if you want it to come back, or if you have any strong opinions about how it should be revitalized.
I’m hesitant to take Kathleen’s job. However, I have plenty of ideas of my own, and would be delighted to do it myself. If this becomes the game plan, I am eager…[Read more]
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TheShadow replied to the topic Couple RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 days, 20 hours ago
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Couple RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week ago
@rae yeah we’ll just have to wait until everyone else agrees to have their characters leave.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Couple RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week ago
@rae haha now I want to have a scene of just the two of them
hey, maybe they’ll be the last two around the fire? Like everyone else decides they’re knackered and go off to their cabins, and then Silvanus and Sniper are the only two left and are kinda forced to talk to each other.
lol that conversation would get crazy. Especially since the…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week ago
Dante
Dante stared at the knife for a long moment, not responding. It stabbed through his coat sleeve, pinning it to the door. Once his heartbeat slowed back down, he let out a deep breath and pulled out the knife.
“Nah, just nicked me,” he said, casually handing it back to Alpha.
He then took off his coat, showing the shallow cut on his…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Couple RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week ago
@rae lolll Silvanis and Fairy are worse than Huntress and Sniper.
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 3 days ago
Dante
“Banned for life! Ya got that? Show your face around here again and I’m calling the cops!”
Dante Tucker found himself being forcefully thrown out of a shop at seven in the morning and into the street. A poorly trimmed bush by the sidewalk broke his fall.
“… One-eyed freak.”
The front door slammed behind him.
Dante picked himself u…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery started the topic Help me pick a colorful name for this magic system in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 3 days ago
Okay, so I think the way I want to do this is, I’ll give you a list of some of the options I’ve come up with, without comment, and you tell me what you like. I’m also not going to tell you what this magic system is about (though you can probably guess some of it from the names.) After I get some feedback, I’ll give you more context. Right now, I…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 week, 4 days ago
@rae I like it! What happened to Baron? He sounds like he got really messed up. Poor guy.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 week, 4 days ago
I like this a lot!! This section is good. I was trying to remember what happened beforehand. So far the stories have flowed, even though they are individual stories. This one seems a little out of place regarding the last one.
otherwise, i like this!!
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Kefa replied to the topic The potato army WIP. in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 5 days ago
Should I tag some people!? I guess so. ^^^^^^
@keilah-h @rae @ellette-giselle @theducktator @grcr @linus-smallprint @raxforge @whalekeeper @loopylin @arcticanimals @esther-c @jonas
hello, hybrid lore told me to tag people if I wanted them to give feedback over my stuff, so if you guys wouldn’t mind, could you judge my story? Thanks! 😅
(it is…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 week, 6 days ago
Kinda random, but I wasn’t sure where else to ask this cause it technically is a drawing-related question: What did you guys imagine Old Hunter to be like? Did you have a specific appearance in mind for him when you read about him?
I was thinking of drawing him interrogating Huntress as an illustration for the fanfic, and I…[Read more]
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Esther started the topic Flash Fiction Critique Needed!!! in the forum Short Story Critiques 2 weeks ago
Hey guys! So I’m entering a little contest that one of my favorite magazines is doing. Basically they wanted me to finish the letter (they gave me like the first two lines) in under 250 words and they’d publish a few of the submissions they’ll receive in the next issue.
I need y’all to tear into this piece! Give me whatever feedback comes to mind…[Read more]
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TheShadow started the topic The Woods of Rosen in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 1 day ago
Hello, how are you all? Nice Thursday isn’t it (well, the weathers not great here but that’s okay).
Here, I will be posting chapters for my new WIP, The Woods of Rosen. ill probably post the first chapter tomorrow once it has been thoroughly cleaned up, and please feel free to critique anything from it. If you don’t like something in it, somet…[Read more]
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Kefa started the topic The potato army WIP. in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 2 days ago
Welcome one and all! This is where I shall share about ALL of my work in progresses! I have quit a few!
Anyway, here my WIPs I have:
The Kingdom of Kaimor (fantasy/sword and sorcery)
A Cellar’s tales, WIP name (group of horror stories, that are connected)
That other WIP, still doesn’t have a name 😅 The one about the immortal girl. (Historical…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 2 weeks, 3 days ago
@rae awww! Baron trying to play with the girls was so cute!!
also I agree with Ellette’s suggestion.
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