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@rae

Oh, good idea bringing this back!

I might be able to participate if I can fit it in around school work. I hope I can.

@rae

Ooh, this looks fun! Do we just post our stories into this topic?

@rae

I almost said that I’m going to try to do this, but then I would have an excuse to not do it. Sooo… I AM going to do this! It think this prompt will stretch me a little bit, but it sounds fun!

@esther-c @whalekeeper @koshka @keilah-h @lightoverdarkness6 @elishavet-pidyon @rae @savannah_grace2009

Sooo, question.

I am advertising Freedom’s Fire as a YA novel, and I wanted to know what y’all thought about that. I def know that my books aren’t middle-grade, mostly because of some content being for older audiences (hinted or even shown…[Read more]

@rae

Hey girl!!!!! How are you doing?

I really want to read all your writing! I started reading the Google Doc you posted, but I can’t read it all tonight, haha!

Honestly, whenever you talk about your charries and worlds and planets I just get so lost…because there are SO MANY OF THEM! So I really want to read the actual writing so I won’t be…[Read more]

@rae @koshka @smiley @esther-c @keilah-h @savannah_grace2009 @anyone-else-lol

Now I have the full Riker scene 🥰👀✨

anyone wanna read??? 👀👀

His arms ached beneath the weight of the hefty wooden box; his fingers strained to keep a steady grip on the material.

Riker lifted the container onto a sturdy metal shelf; he pushed the large box back,…

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@rae

All your replies are noted ;P

I saw somewhere that you have trouble with paragraph breaks. I love sequencing sentences, especially dialogue sentences, so I’ll give you some suggestions here in just a sec.

@rae @loopylin

I actually read an article a while back and it talked a little bit about why it didn’t do well

https://letterboxd.com/journal/space-surfers-treasure-planet-at-twenty/

the link might not work since its for the app not the website

@theducktator Treasure Planet is pretty much just Treasure Island, but in space. If you don’t know Treasure Island, its about a boy, Jim Hawkins, who finds a treasure map and goes on a trip to find the treasure, but it turns out that a lot of the crew on the ship are pirates.

@rae @loopylin

I just wanted to ask cuz it apparently did really p…

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@rae

I read your Tenz scene and it was hilarious. Poor guy is so confused.

@rae

YOUR KITTENS ARE ADORABLE

@freed_and_redeemed

I LOVE RIKER SO MUCH <333333

I had one of these moments a few weeks ago…I’ve been having a hard time with feeling not good enough, like a mistake, and like God’s grace was for everybody else….and then I started asking the same questions as Riker, and then I felt God speaking to me! Those bad thoughts don’t really bother…[Read more]

@rae

What is Treasure Planet about?

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Okay XD Disclaimer. It has been 5+ years since I wrote this girl. She is one of my oldest characters, and I mean so old, she was in my very first official story… when I was six. 🙃❤️

I’ll adjust her a bit, but of course she’ll have similar vibes. I’m proud of what she represents and the memories of my childhood storyteller persona…[Read more]

@rae I’m sorry for abandoning Alpha 😞 Dante tends to just leave when he stops finding the people he’s with entertaining

@whalekeeper

Ooooh yes, movies!!! (A very big part of why I don’t read or write as much as I used to) (but I love them!!)

I will gladly talk about movies. For so long.

@rae Treasure Planet!!! Yesss, I love it, and I have yet to meet anyone who doesn’t… Be careful coming forward if you don’t

@loopylin you know me so well 😊😊😁

Wait wait wait wait wait wait wait.

Okay you know what? Maybe Alpha’s tune will change if he actually had to bring a girl to the dance.

@rae I have a techie sci-fi girl if that’s an option you like.

@loopylin

Darn it. I need to grow another inch. Or wear some chunkier boots

Haha, I wear platform sneakers too 😈

@rae

I think Alpha has insulted everyone in this culture by now, from his opinions on dancing to his disgust in their non-warrior mindset to his dislike of pepperoni pizza.

Bruh needs to realize this is a melting pot of worlds and he’s…[Read more]

@rae @loopylin

“No fun outside of fighting, eh?” He shrugged again. “Your loss.”

OoF

@rae

People who don’t like Treasure Planet don’t exist, Rae. There only those who love it and those who haven’t seen it yet.