@rae
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
@esther-c @whalekeeper @koshka @keilah-h @lightoverdarkness6 @elishavet-pidyon @rae @savannah_grace2009
Sooo, question.
I am advertising Freedom’s Fire as a YA novel, and I wanted to know what y’all thought about that. I def know that my books aren’t middle-grade, mostly because of some content being for older audiences (hinted or even shown…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Guardian Angels, a space story in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years ago
Hey girl!!!!! How are you doing?
I really want to read all your writing! I started reading the Google Doc you posted, but I can’t read it all tonight, haha!
Honestly, whenever you talk about your charries and worlds and planets I just get so lost…because there are SO MANY OF THEM! So I really want to read the actual writing so I won’t be…[Read more]
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
@rae @koshka @smiley @esther-c @keilah-h @savannah_grace2009 @anyone-else-lol
Now I have the full Riker scene 🥰👀✨
anyone wanna read??? 👀👀
His arms ached beneath the weight of the hefty wooden box; his fingers strained to keep a steady grip on the material.
Riker lifted the container onto a sturdy metal shelf; he pushed the large box back,…
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic Guardian Angels, a space story in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years ago
All your replies are noted ;P
I saw somewhere that you have trouble with paragraph breaks. I love sequencing sentences, especially dialogue sentences, so I’ll give you some suggestions here in just a sec.
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic Movie Thoughts & Reviews (Anyone) in the forum Film 2 years ago
I actually read an article a while back and it talked a little bit about why it didn’t do well
https://letterboxd.com/journal/space-surfers-treasure-planet-at-twenty/
the link might not work since its for the app not the website
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic Movie Thoughts & Reviews (Anyone) in the forum Film 2 years ago
@theducktator Treasure Planet is pretty much just Treasure Island, but in space. If you don’t know Treasure Island, its about a boy, Jim Hawkins, who finds a treasure map and goes on a trip to find the treasure, but it turns out that a lot of the crew on the ship are pirates.
I just wanted to ask cuz it apparently did really p…
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The Ducktator replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
I read your Tenz scene and it was hilarious. Poor guy is so confused.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
YOUR KITTENS ARE ADORABLE
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
I LOVE RIKER SO MUCH <333333
I had one of these moments a few weeks ago…I’ve been having a hard time with feeling not good enough, like a mistake, and like God’s grace was for everybody else….and then I started asking the same questions as Riker, and then I felt God speaking to me! Those bad thoughts don’t really bother…[Read more]
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The Ducktator replied to the topic Movie Thoughts & Reviews (Anyone) in the forum Film 2 years ago
What is Treasure Planet about?
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
Okay XD Disclaimer. It has been 5+ years since I wrote this girl. She is one of my oldest characters, and I mean so old, she was in my very first official story… when I was six. 🙃❤️
I’ll adjust her a bit, but of course she’ll have similar vibes. I’m proud of what she represents and the memories of my childhood storyteller persona…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
@rae I’m sorry for abandoning Alpha 😞 Dante tends to just leave when he stops finding the people he’s with entertaining
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic Movie Thoughts & Reviews (Anyone) in the forum Film 2 years ago
Ooooh yes, movies!!! (A very big part of why I don’t read or write as much as I used to) (but I love them!!)
I will gladly talk about movies. For so long.
@rae Treasure Planet!!! Yesss, I love it, and I have yet to meet anyone who doesn’t… Be careful coming forward if you don’t
@loopylin you know me so well 😊😊😁
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
Wait wait wait wait wait wait wait.
Okay you know what? Maybe Alpha’s tune will change if he actually had to bring a girl to the dance.
@rae I have a techie sci-fi girl if that’s an option you like.
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
Darn it. I need to grow another inch. Or wear some chunkier boots
Haha, I wear platform sneakers too 😈
I think Alpha has insulted everyone in this culture by now, from his opinions on dancing to his disgust in their non-warrior mindset to his dislike of pepperoni pizza.
Bruh needs to realize this is a melting pot of worlds and he’s…[Read more]
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
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Loopy replied to the topic Movie Thoughts & Reviews (Anyone) in the forum Film 2 years ago
People who don’t like Treasure Planet don’t exist, Rae. There only those who love it and those who haven’t seen it yet.
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
Dante
“No fun outside of fighting, eh?” He shrugged again. “Your loss.”
He then turned on his heel, gave Alpha a short wave, and walked away down the sidewalk.
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
I don’t think I need some worthless dance. Besides, I’ve seen this culture’s idea of dancing. It’s more boring than when nothing goes wrong on a mission.
*Gasp* Bruh.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
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