@rae
Active 4 days, 9 hours ago- Rank: Chosen One
- Total Posts: 4707
-
TheShadow replied to the topic My short story in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 11 months ago
Great job!!! Your story felt so authentic and real, it was amazing!!! You could definitely turn it into a novella but I really like it too as a short story too, so either option would work well.
-
The Ducktator replied to the topic Couple RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 11 months ago
Yes! The awkwardness of finding out this is a couples thing would be hilarious.
@theshadow @princesachronicle22 @rae
Should we have like a big cabin somewhere with food? And maybe games?
-
Keilah H. replied to the topic Couple RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 11 months ago
@theshadow for some reason I’m happy that Trevor recognizes Sniper’s unusual expressions. Maybe I’ll put them in the same group, try and get my stubborn “adopted” character to make a friend lol
@rae @princesachronicle22 @theducktator
Huntress/Sniper
“I say we should split into groups and fan out. That way we can cover more ground and…[Read more]
-
The Ducktator replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 12 months ago
-
freedom posted a new activity comment 1 year, 12 months ago
@esther-c @grcr @rae @koshka *hands out tissues to Leon and everyone else and goes to make cupcakes*
I know this one was super emotional 😭💖 but it really is the starting point of Leon turning his life completely around <3
After this, Leon will start getting some advice/basically counseling from Ezekiel, Isaiah, Louisa, etc. He'll start going back…[Read more] -
Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic My short story in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 12 months ago
Okay. I’ve never heard of those before.
-
Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic My short story in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 12 months ago
That makes sense. I do think it would be better to either have more sci-fi elements or not mention them at all. As it is, it’s just enough to be confusing. I would imagine that if you did write this into a novella, it would fix the problem, since you would have more time for it to become clear.
Is a zip a real thing or is it an instance o…[Read more]
-
HighScribe replied to the topic My short story in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 12 months ago
Ok 👍 makes sense. Yeah, I didn’t take it to mean you actually believed in extraterrestrial life.
-
The Ducktator replied to the topic My short story in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 12 months ago
Beautiful! It would make a great novella.
-
Esther replied to the topic Movie Thoughts & Reviews (Anyone) in the forum Film 1 year, 12 months ago
Yes, that was cool to see 😊
-
Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 12 months ago
Awww, so sadddd 😢
-
freedom posted a new activity comment 1 year, 12 months ago
The Chat Chat is being weird for me for some reason 🙄
sooooooo I decided to share this scene here!!!
@esther-c @rae @grcr @theducktator @loopylin @lightoverdarkness6 @savannah_grace2009 @koshka @keilah-h @anyone-else-idk-lolllll -
freedom replied to the topic WIP Questions in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 12 months ago
@rae eeeee love it so much 😍😍😍
@mineralizedwritings Love it <3 And Tauren 🥰
@grcr Interesting!!! 👀 Very curious to see where it goes!
@linus-smallprint Oooh, I like the 19th century fantasy! That’s very unique and super cool!!!
-
Esther replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 12 months ago
-
Esther replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 12 months ago
@theducktator @rae @freed_and_redeemed @savannah_grace2009
Ahhh!!! I love all these moodboards so much!!! They look great y’all! ✨
-
Keilah H. replied to the topic Couple RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 12 months ago
you know what? I’m gonna go for it cause I don’t really want another dead RP on my hands lol
@princesachronicle22 @rae @theshadow @theducktator
Huntress/Sniper
“If we have the ingredients, I can make pumpkin spice lattes. I work at a coffee shop. Does anyone know if there is any food at all in this place?” Joy asked.
I wanted to know more…[Read more]
-
HighScribe replied to the topic My short story in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 12 months ago
So, Estelle has a Bible, but this seems to take place in the same universe as all/most of your stories. So is your sci-fi universe supposed to be the same as our universe?
-
HighScribe replied to the topic My short story in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 12 months ago
I really like it, you did a really nice job!
Although I would bring up the same thing as Jonas, about the setting and stuff.
-
Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic My short story in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 12 months ago
Very nice, and I think it would work very well as a novella! The only thing I’m confused about is that it apparently takes place in a sci-fi world (since you mentioned other planets), but the setting seemed to be normal.
-
Trailblazer replied to the topic My short story in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 12 months ago
That is so beautiful! So raw and real and yet redemptive! I love it!
- Load More

Ooh 😬 Funnn