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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
Aww, I loved it!!
The only thing I’d recommend is to really deepen Chase’s pov, especially after he gives up his sight. Because it still felt like he could see with the way things were described. I think if you describe it in the way in which Chase was experiencing it, then it will have a much bigger impact.
Other than that it was good! (:
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
Aww that scene was sooo cute! <3
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whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
I like the deer-like appearance of the unicorn. It also seems like a fun resolution scene. Family reunion scenes are the best. I can also picture Chase on the cushions well, because I know what it feels like to be an invalid now and then but still participate in family activities.
I feel like the blindness bit was too much? I mean for Chase…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Challenge! in the forum Art 2 years, 3 months ago
@ellette-giselle @rae @theshadow @highscribeofaetherium @linus-smallprint @grcr @mineralizedwritings
I was going to introduce my new character today, but I procrastinated too much on making a description you all could follow lol
is it ok if I wait till Monday to do it? I have something on Sunday I have to do and won’t be able to post a…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Fairytale AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
@rae yessss we should restart this
given that I have Jaylen/Huntress and Mundy/Sniper already in one RP, I was a bit iffy about continuing this with them, but honestly, the more I think about the more I want it to happen. (It’s not like I haven’t stuck a charrie in two or more RPs before. Hunter, Crosshair, Snake…..)
also Tenz would be cool!
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whaley replied to the topic Fairytale AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
I forgot about this. I might join if it gets started, but I don’t have any ideas for what to do next.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
@highscribeofaetherium @rae @jonas @loopylin @thearcaneaxiom @savannah_grace2009 @linus-smallprint @theshadow @princesachronicle22 @whalekeeper @stephie @grcr @esther-c @theloonyone @ava-blue @hybridlore @keilah-h @koshka @livingwoodchronicles @freed_and_redeemed
Ok, I’ve been playing around with the front cover to The Space Between Us. What…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
@highscribeofaetherium @rae @jonas @loopylin @thearcaneaxiom @savannah_grace2009 @linus-smallprint @theshadow @princesachronicle22 @whalekeeper @stephie @grcr @esther-c @theloonyone @ava-blue @hybridlore @keilah-h @koshka @livingwoodchronicles @freed_and_redeemed
Jonathan just got himself into a bad situation if anyone is…[Read more]
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic Couple RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
@rae @keilah-h @theshadow @princesachronicle22
Who all is still back at the cabins? Both of my couples stayed behind.
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
@esther-c @mineralizedwritings @rae @savannah_grace2009 @smiley @keilah-h @ellette-giselle @koshka @grcr @theducktator @highscribeofaetherium @anyone-else-idk-lol
I (finally) made a Pinterest account! Even if y’all don’t have Pinterest, you can check it out here(just delete the space after the h; I know KP doesn’t like links, so😂):
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TheShadow replied to the topic Couple RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
Trevor
The creature raised its claw, but before it could slash Trevor he jumped to the side. Then, before he could realize what was happening, Fairy had defeated it, and it lay on the ground, motionless.
Trevor stared as Silvanis kissed Fairy on the forehead, then realized everyone was watching. “Uh, you guys didn’t see tha…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Couple RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
Sniper
Fairy had done some fine work, in my opinion. The creature fell at her feet, dead.
Silvanis came to her and kissed her forehead suddenly, lookin’ up at us, startled, when he remembered he wasn’t alone. “Uh, you guys didn’t see that.”
I chuckled. “No judgement ‘ere, mate. I’m sure we’ve all done somethin’ similar.”
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Challenge! in the forum Art 2 years, 3 months ago
also @rae Tenz is awesome, terrifying as he seems….
lol
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Ruth replied to the topic Couple RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
Silvanis
Trevor drew his knives, ready for the creature to make its move. Silvanis watched Fairy closely as she slowly positioned herself at an angle where she could hit the creature, a strange sly smile crossing her face. As the beast ran for Trevor, Fairy ran towards it. Silvanis was shocked at the move. Fairy was going to…[Read more]
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TheShadow replied to the topic Couple RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
Silvanis does have a plan in all this. Don’t worry, he’d never let serious harm come to Fairy.
I was starting to wonder at the end there lol
Trevor
“Great plan, Trevor, just omit the Silvanis and Sniper part. Fairy will handle it alone. If anyone disagrees, they answer to me.” As Silvanis said this, his skin began to glow.…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
@highscribeofaetherium @rae @jonas @loopylin @thearcaneaxiom @savannah_grace2009 @linus-smallprint @theshadow @princesachronicle22 @ellette-giselle @whalekeeper @stephie @grcr @esther-c @theloonyone @ava-blue @hybridlore @keilah-h @koshka @livingwoodchronicles @freed_and_redeemed
Would anyone like to see the cover of my newest book I’m about…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Art Challenge! in the forum Art 2 years, 3 months ago
@keilah-h @theshadow @highscribeofaetherium @grcr @mineralizedwritings @loopylin @theducktator @grcr @rae
Congratulations everyone!
Yeah, when I saw GRCR I thought, “Game over, that’s the winner” lol. It was an amazing rendition of him!! Great job!!
Who would like to submit the next description?
I would unless someone else is going…[Read more]
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FIREQUACKER started the topic Do You Use Fantasy Maps? in the forum Fantasy 2 years, 3 months ago
I need to settle a debate.
So, my brother and I often read fantasy series together. (He is making me clarify. We read them at the same time, not literally together.) Recently, we got into an argument about whether it’s normal to regularly reference the maps in the front as you read. So, he suggested I ask here. I almost never use the maps,…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Art Challenge! in the forum Art 2 years, 3 months ago
Thank you for the challenge and the feedback! I like the shading of the hair on your drawing. This character is a lot darker than he appears to be, isn’t he?
@ellette-giselle @keilah-h @theshadow @highscribeofaetherium @grcr @mineralizedwritings @loopylin @theductator
Who would like to submit the next description?
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TheShadow replied to the topic Art Challenge! in the forum Art 2 years, 3 months ago
Thanks, and I think I get what you mean. Your Tenz drawing is really good btw!!
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