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@grcr @mineralizedwritings @ellette-giselle @rae @savannah_grace2009 @esther-c @koshka @lightoverdarkness6 @whalekeeper @smiley @anyone-else-idk-lol-XD

I made a couple new aesthetics for Leon and Riker🥰

(and I absolutely adore Pinterest and Canva now y’all😂😂 so helpful)

Andddddd y’all get to help me decide which character to make an aesthetic…[Read more]

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Sef

“That’s so cool,” she said. “Can you-can you do me?” she wanted to know.

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I’m sorry, I’ve just been super lazy with my RP’ing lately XD XD

here you go! <3

Sef

“She’s pretty,” Sef smiled. “How can you get her picture in your eyes?” she asked, feeling dumb for asking, but the curiosity  wouldn’t recede.

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And you can rip apart my writing too XD XD

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I blame all of you for the lack of sleep last night XD. Seriously, what Loopy said had me thinking.

Sorry!

… but I’m also glad I got you thinking 😉

Soo if Chase’s sacrifice for Jenny felt more light and joyful, maybe you could show how he’s grown from the way he acted with Marcel? I’m not sure how exactly, but you could probably keep all…[Read more]

@rae Awesome! I’ll wait to see if anyone else has an opinion lol, but here are the characters I would be joining with…

@keilah-h @theshadow @theducktator @princesachronicle22 @I-think-that’s-it?

They’re both Lupinari soldiers. Imagine essentially humanoid wolves. They wear silver armor and walk upright on their hind paws. Age is different in…[Read more]

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In my opinion, just don’t think of him as a “hero” when he sacrifices himself. You can still keep him the same, just don’t think of him the same way.

Idk if this is making sense…

I tried lol

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I don’t think anyone was saying that you need to change Chase. Like Loopy and Whaley said, it’s not bad that he has that flaw, because he’s a flawed character that grows and changes in your story. We were just concerned that you were portraying him as more of a hero and that flaw was celebrated.

@whalekeeper @loopylin correct me if I’m wrong…XD

@princesachronicle22 @rae @theshadow @theducktator @if-there’s-anyone-else-haha

*awkward cough*

I know this has been going for a bit, but would it be possible to join? If it’s too much to remember, totally fine lol, but I have just one couple. I think @keilah-h is the only one who would know these two (and hybridlore, but I don’t think she’s in…[Read more]

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Just to clarify, I think that Chase having that flaw makes him a good and realistic character. I’m not critiquing his flaw, I’m critiquing that it’s being shown as a virtue.

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Okay…after reading it again and reading the other’s comments…

I completely agree with @whaley and @loopy.

Chase has always kind of bothered me for the exact reason that Loopy said, but I couldn’t put it into words until I saw her post.

It doesn’t ever seem like he’s being “kind” because all it is is him beating himself up and feeling…[Read more]

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DISCLAIMER: GRAMMAR NAZI PATRIOT RANT AHEAD.

My only critique would be the use of the word “alright”. It’s not technically a word. The correct term would be all right. I’m sorry, but that word just drives me insane. My forum signature is ridiculously accurate right now.

@theducktator 8 or 9

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Ok, first off, I love Jenny and also how you made the unicorn have cloven hooves.

I do have some critiques, though. Sorry if they aren’t helpful.

I don’t think giving your characters what they want is a good idea, unless you’re writing a tragedy. If I gave Ellie the safety that she wanted, she would isolate herse…[Read more]

@theshadow @rae

Should those back at the cabins find the larger cabin with the note/inscription?

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Aww, I loved it!!

The only thing I’d recommend is to really deepen Chase’s pov, especially after he gives up his sight. Because it still felt like he could see with the way things were described. I think if you describe it in the way in which Chase was experiencing it, then it will have a much bigger impact.

Other than that it was good! (:

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Aww that scene was sooo cute! <3

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I like the deer-like appearance of the unicorn. It also seems like a fun resolution scene. Family reunion scenes are the best. I can also picture Chase on the cushions well, because I know what it feels like to be an invalid now and then but still participate in family activities.

I feel like the blindness bit was too much? I mean for Chase…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle @rae @theshadow @highscribeofaetherium @linus-smallprint @grcr @mineralizedwritings

I was going to introduce my new character today, but I procrastinated too much on making a description you all could follow lol

is it ok if I wait till Monday to do it? I have something on Sunday I have to do and won’t be able to post a…[Read more]

@rae yessss we should restart this

given that I have Jaylen/Huntress and Mundy/Sniper already in one RP, I was a bit iffy about continuing this with them, but honestly, the more I think about the more I want it to happen. (It’s not like I haven’t stuck a charrie in two or more RPs before. Hunter, Crosshair, Snake…..)

also Tenz would be cool!

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I forgot about this. I might join if it gets started, but I don’t have any ideas for what to do next.