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TheShadow replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
Sure!
Thank you!!
Rowen
The lack of people was rather unsettling in the corridor, the dim light of the torches not helping to boost the mood. Odd. Rowen thought as he followed Emeline. This is all very… odd. “Is there anyone here?!” Emeline exclaimed, opening a door to a room and peeking in. There was no point in being s…[Read more]
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TheShadow started the topic Please tear this apart in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 10 months ago
Hello, here is the first chapter of my WIP, and please, feel free to rip this thing apart. Critique it as much as you want, if there’s something that seems off, illogical, or is bothering you, don’t be afraid to tell me. I want this story to be the best it can, and the only way to get there is through trial and error. If I tag you, please don’t…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
@calyhuge thx
So basically you post a description of your charrie/charries, and you get to explore the school with your characters 😀 Just like Keilah described!
We take turns writing interactions between people, and sometimes people have their own groups/factions/whatever. Things can get crazy; we’ve had several bully vs hero…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
@rae Just a few high school ones. My favorite is by a Christian author and is called “Fearfully and Wonderfully Made.” It’s one of the few that I find okay to read at 11 at night lol
It’s an older one though.
Here’s the cover cause I think it’s cool:

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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
@rae I can imagine that would be rather disturbing lol
pro tip: NEVER read medical textbooks at 11:00 at night when you’re really tired, and that’s coming from someone who reads them for fun during the daylight hours.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
@rae “that one time” lol
yeah that’s happened to me before….not sure if that’s a good thing or not
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whaley replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
Barnes
With Reid directing, Barnes swept through multiple passages and rooms, and made sure to get an idea of the layout.
It wasn’t worth saying, but she liked the decor. Rich greens and oranges lined the inner rooms, sparkling against the surface of glass trinkets. Delicate paintings, stained with dust, barely portrayed more than…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
Barnes
“Oh trust me, I am,” Barnes murmured behind the sculpted smile. She swung around and stared further down the hall. “It is usually easier to commiserate with a care than to peruse the plot, eh? How about we look for other people?”
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whaley replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
Sounds like a developmental disability. I’m not too familiar the terminology, but my brother has a brain shunt, so I’ve met a lot of people disabled in that area.
Barnes
“My name is Commissioner Barnes. Nice to meet you.” The woman shook Reid’s hand, took off her cape coat and draped it over her arm. She approached a nearby…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
@rae ahhh ok!
just wondering!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
@rae aww Tenz is kinda sweet, what mental issues exactly does he have?
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whaley replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
Barnes
“I’m Hugo, the Sharkman’s son.” He blinked heavily. “I’m not… heavy…”
The boy went slack, and his thin legs quickly collapsed. Tenz picked him up and handed him to his companion.
“Do you two gentlemen know of a locomotive which stopped nearby?” Barnes asked. When they shook their heads, she tried again. “How else did you come here?…[Read more]
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic Mini Adventure Ideas? in the forum Plotting 1 year, 10 months ago
I was actually planning to have Howard get captured and taken to the zoo in a later chapter, lol.
The only definition of DMV I found was Department of Motor Vehicles, so hopefully that’s right. Linda wants a Ferrari.
Ooh, a fair! She would get her beak stuck in a caramel apple. XD
Lol I love t…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
Aw thx for the help Tenz
(Starting a minute before your charries walked in)
Barnes
Hugo refused her handkerchief for the third and last time. He seemed to be doing alright; Commissioner Barnes wasn’t going to risk losing her only lead besides herself. She refrained from talking about the matter any longer.
The two made a strange pair.…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
@rae Tenz and Reid are free to meet up with us if you’d like that
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whaley replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
Aw thanks :]
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
@rae
I think you can just put them wherever.@keilah-h @theshadow @grcr @whalekeeper @esther-c @freed_and_redeemed
Ayla
Ooh, a war! This would make an amazing tale for my memoirs. “I’m Ayla,” I informed the stranger. He appeared to have changed his mind about killing me. “My guess is that we will encounter at least three more people. Rarely do…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
@rae you can totally join!
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whaley replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
and the twin I really want to rp with is a young teen, but he’s rather immature.
My charrie is pretty good at monitoring immature children. I’ll try to get her in here if my mind is apt enough; I’ve been in RP burnout for quite some time lol.
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
@rae I’m so glad you’re doing well🥰 Rowing sounds fun, and I’m glad you’ve found a good friend :3
AND WOO HOOOOO ON THE STORY PROGRESS!!!! 🎉🎉🎉
I’m glad everyone’s doing…fine. Most of them sound good, others…I may be a little concerned XXD
I’m so sorry. 😭😭 I miss him too.
Leon and Riker are….fine??? I guess??? I’m currently editing…[Read more]
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