Ruth

@rae thank you!! Glad you liked it, and yes I can agree the ending was amazing; when I read the original I was like “oh I gotta have this, it’s great”

I actually added the comic artist’s appearance; in the original, it simply shows them all talking and then the doorbell rings, then it switches to a panel of a door, then Scout opening the door an…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

I actually love that Liv is younger but thought to herself that Aubrielle needs the resources more. It’s only a little contrast (to the ‘save the resources for the youngest’ trope) but does a lot to show her personality.

@rae

Yep, yw! And don’t be afraid to keep tagging me for stuff.

@rae

Yep, yw! And don’t be afraid to keep tagging me for stuff.

@esther-c

Don’t get your hopes up girl! Ellette kills approximately every character who ever existed 🤣🤣

@rae oh okay, cool!!

Okay, guys…I’m just going to start tagging everyone I can think of lol

Would anyone be interested in reading through/critiquing/giving suggestions on my WIP?

I love writing, but it’s hard to write when I’m not sure if people would even be interested in reading it or if it’s actually trash lollll

Not that I care what people think, but it…[Read more]

@rae

Amazing scene! And I agree with Whaley. Not too repetitive, but maybe substitute a few of those “Fathers” with something like, “The man” or something. Not too much of that either, but just enough to brake up the monotony of “Father”

@savannah_grace2009

Ooh I love desert settings! Too bad Liv doesn’t feel the same way – and too bad she is so exhausted, for that matter. Is this sister older or younger than her?

@rae

I don’t think it’s too repetitive, except for this bit at the beginning:

Baron knocked and entered his Father’s quarters. He knelt. “You sent for me, Fat…

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@rae awesome, is it connected to any of your other stories or is it separate?

@rae lol that’s characters for you

I mean, I couldn’t figure out what I wanted to put down either, and that’s mostly cause Huntress and Sniper were having this kind of conversation in the background of my brain and I couldn’t pay attention:

H: What do you wanna sing? I mean, we gotta give her something so she can write it down.

S: You come up…

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@keilah-h

I’m glad you like Huntress as a character! I honestly didn’t expect too many people to care all that much about her. She’s one of my favorite characters I’ve created so far, so…

I do like her, it’s fun reading from her perspective. Her comments are really funny.

@whalekeeper

Yay, welcome Izzy and Pilgrim!!

@rae

How do you deal with h…[Read more]

@rae

Aw. That’s sad. Thanks for tagging me!!!

@liberty   @koshka  (I’m guessing by your comment that you read the section posted above.)

Do you really want to know if he dies?

(That is actually not the character I killed yesterday. I killed someone else which is why the flashback was there at all.)

Any thoughts on the section?!?!

@rae I’ve read of several other characters in Baron’s position….

They’re always interesting, if not a little sad.

Which of your stories is he from?

And now…I will proceed to hit four people…

@ellette-giselle @power @rae @esther-c

Write or die!!!!

@ellette-giselle Sorry…please check the post above…sometimes when I post names it still doesn’t tag them.

@hybridlore Here is the next installment of Dale’s story…

…and everyone else who shows up in this part in some little way…@ellette-giselle @theshadow @elishavet-pidyon @koshka @hybridlore @raxforge @freed_and_redeemed @esther-c @power @loopylin @rae @the_lost-journal

I’m serious. Everyone shows up in this story at least once. *grin* read…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint @rae @loopylin @godlyfantasy12 @ellette-giselle @hybridlore and whoever

I have a new project I’m excited to work on this week. Just spent an hour plotting the first half of it, but I’m still ironing out the wrinkles before drafting it. Some of that has to do with genre.

I think it’s going to have a lot of contemporary elements.…[Read more]

after RAE’s and Linus’s impressive art, you get a weird little Huntress and Sniper sketch I did at 11:30 on New Year’s eve and colored three days later.

you guys (girls? It’s mostly girls on here besides Linus isn’t it lol) even get a little piece of out of context dialogue lol

I do really like this one though. I think their height…[Read more]

@keilah-h @rae @theducktator @kyronthearcanin @princesachronicle22

If it’s alright, I’m gonna write the next RP.

Azalea

“You all have such beautiful voices.” Azalea said to those of the group who had sung, each nodding their thanks.

“Where did Trevor go?” Rosalind asked, and Azalea scanned the area.

“I’m not sure, I think-”

“Hey Azalea, I…[Read more]

@koshka   @grcr   @liberty   @keilah-h    @rae     @esther-c     @theducktator  @godlyfantasy12    @smiley    @savannah_grace2009 @lightoverdarkness6     @whalekeeper   @linus-smallprint     @highscribeofaetherium     @anyoneelsewhomightbeinterested.

Have any of you seen The Man Who Invented Christmas? It’s the story of how Charles Dickens wr…[Read more]

@rae @loopylin @linus-smallprint @theshadow @keilah-h @theducktator I’m just tagging whoever comes to mind. I hope some of you will do this too, and if so, hope to meet you in the sprinting topic on Monday!