Ruth

@whalekeeper hehe

writing rps where my characters are ticked off is always super fun, but then I feel instantly embarrassed after I post them.

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Dante has officially been added to Alpha’s possible threat list….

lol there goes Dante’s free rent. At least he’s not underestimating him anymore.

@theducktator @stephie @ellette-giselle @liberty (How is your KP fanfic coming along? Have you worked on it? I eagerly await the next section) @highscribeofaetherium @whalekeeper @power @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @raxforge @rae @jonas @loopylin @esther-c @linus-smallprint

10 snowballs at each of you! That’s 500 words, and I expect to be s…[Read more]

@whalekeeper @rae @koshka This would have been funnier if i had posted it while it was still relevant, but here

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Alpha is talking specifically about Hypodermic needles and syringes just to make it clear.

Good to know. I was wondering about that. Like what if he needed stitches?

Also I apologize for my character’s rudeness in advance, lol

Dante

Dante’s mouth twitched as he tried to hold back a wry grin.

“Heh. I knew you’d do that.”

He didn’…[Read more]

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you and your messed up warriors!
😆

@rae Hehehe Alpha has more knives than social skills

Dante

“Oi…” Dante growled. He straightened his posture and crossed his arms. “I might be smaller than you, but I’m tougher than I look. Survived this long. And I don’t have some stupid needle phobia.”

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🫢

I can not believe he just said that to Dante

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I would say it was fulfilled rather than changed. The Bible says not a dot not an iota will go away and nothing will change. (Murdering the wording, but that’s the raw meaning)

Otherwise yeah! Looking forward to the next part.

@rae sorry it’s short

Dante

“So you’re an assassin.”

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this was another good section. I feel like you’re really sinking into a good style and voice with this. I had a slight problem with one sentence though.

When Immanuel came, the laws God previously had placed changed.

I don’t see that in the Bible. If anything, the laws were reinforced more strongly. (You have heard it said do not commit adu…[Read more]

@rae oooh! His old friend came to stay where he was, that’s nice!

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Dante

For probably the tenth time since they first met, Dante was thankful that Alpha seemed to consider him a friend, or at least someone who wasn’t a threat.

He laughed nervously. “Uhh, no. I haven’t heard anything. Do you… normally go around stabbing people in the gut? I mean, I get the boredom thing, but there are less bloody ways to…[Read more]

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Hmm. I’ve written some fight scenes, but am not overly satisfied with them. I just make the characters bang their blades around for a bit until I feel it is time to make someone win. I did a little bit of research on sword fighting to improve it a bit.

I like @whalekeeper‘s advice though, about using surroundings to both hinder and help…[Read more]

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I really wish i could draw like that.

Giiirrl, stop roasting yourself. Thank you, though!

@liberty @rae @theshadow

Awww thank you so much!!!!!! <333

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Thanks for the article! Unfortunately I’m not very good at fight scenes either, so I won’t be much help. 🙁

More tags: @whalekeeper @linus-smallprint @grcr @the_lost-journal @theshadow

@rae yeah idk what’s wrong with me

but hey, that was a great chapter!

@rae that was awesome!

“Finally a fellow you like, and he’s a possible assassin.” Dr. Handel shook his head. “I will never understand a girls’ attractions.

Neither do I, and I’m a girl who the only fellow she likes is a (fortunately fictional) assassin too, apparently.

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I will be more annoyed if you save people who need to die for character arc or story purposes.

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and Baron goes for it. 🤣🤣 that was the bluntest declaration of love I’ve seen in a while. 😆

Good section. One of your best, honestly. I’m starting to really feel your characters!