Ruth

@theducktator 8 or 9

@rae

Ok, first off, I love Jenny and also how you made the unicorn have cloven hooves.

I do have some critiques, though. Sorry if they aren’t helpful.

I don’t think giving your characters what they want is a good idea, unless you’re writing a tragedy. If I gave Ellie the safety that she wanted, she would isolate herse…[Read more]

@theshadow @rae

Should those back at the cabins find the larger cabin with the note/inscription?

@rae

Aww, I loved it!!

The only thing I’d recommend is to really deepen Chase’s pov, especially after he gives up his sight. Because it still felt like he could see with the way things were described. I think if you describe it in the way in which Chase was experiencing it, then it will have a much bigger impact.

Other than that it was good! (:

@rae

Aww that scene was sooo cute! <3

@rae

I like the deer-like appearance of the unicorn. It also seems like a fun resolution scene. Family reunion scenes are the best. I can also picture Chase on the cushions well, because I know what it feels like to be an invalid now and then but still participate in family activities.

I feel like the blindness bit was too much? I mean for Chase…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle @rae @theshadow @highscribeofaetherium @linus-smallprint @grcr @mineralizedwritings

I was going to introduce my new character today, but I procrastinated too much on making a description you all could follow lol

is it ok if I wait till Monday to do it? I have something on Sunday I have to do and won’t be able to post a…[Read more]

@rae yessss we should restart this

given that I have Jaylen/Huntress and Mundy/Sniper already in one RP, I was a bit iffy about continuing this with them, but honestly, the more I think about the more I want it to happen. (It’s not like I haven’t stuck a charrie in two or more RPs before. Hunter, Crosshair, Snake…..)

also Tenz would be cool!

@rae

I forgot about this. I might join if it gets started, but I don’t have any ideas for what to do next.

@highscribeofaetherium @rae @jonas @loopylin @thearcaneaxiom @savannah_grace2009 @linus-smallprint @theshadow @princesachronicle22 @whalekeeper @stephie @grcr @esther-c @theloonyone @ava-blue @hybridlore @keilah-h @koshka @livingwoodchronicles @freed_and_redeemed

Ok, I’ve been playing around with the front cover to The Space Between Us. What…[Read more]

@highscribeofaetherium @rae @jonas @loopylin @thearcaneaxiom @savannah_grace2009 @linus-smallprint @theshadow @princesachronicle22 @whalekeeper @stephie @grcr @esther-c @theloonyone @ava-blue @hybridlore @keilah-h @koshka @livingwoodchronicles @freed_and_redeemed

Jonathan just got himself into a bad situation if anyone is…[Read more]

@rae @keilah-h @theshadow @princesachronicle22

Who all is still back at the cabins? Both of my couples stayed behind.

@esther-c @mineralizedwritings @rae @savannah_grace2009 @smiley @keilah-h @ellette-giselle @koshka @grcr @theducktator @highscribeofaetherium @anyone-else-idk-lol

I (finally) made a Pinterest account! Even if y’all don’t have Pinterest, you can check it out here(just delete the space after the h; I know KP doesn’t like links, so😂):

h…[Read more]

@keilah-h @rae

Trevor

The creature raised its claw, but before it could slash Trevor he jumped to the side. Then, before he could realize what was happening, Fairy had defeated it, and it lay on the ground, motionless.

Trevor stared as Silvanis kissed Fairy on the forehead, then realized everyone was watching. “Uh, you guys didn’t see tha…[Read more]

@rae @theshadow

Sniper

Fairy had done some fine work, in my opinion. The creature fell at her feet, dead.

Silvanis came to her and kissed her forehead suddenly, lookin’ up at us, startled, when he remembered he wasn’t alone. “Uh, you guys didn’t see that.”

I chuckled. “No judgement ‘ere, mate. I’m sure we’ve all done somethin’ similar.”

I…[Read more]

also @rae Tenz is awesome, terrifying as he seems….

lol

@theshadow @rae

Silvanis

Trevor drew his knives, ready for the creature to make its move. Silvanis watched Fairy closely as she slowly positioned herself at an angle where she could hit the creature, a strange sly smile crossing her face. As the beast ran for Trevor, Fairy ran towards it. Silvanis was shocked at the move. Fairy was going to…[Read more]

@keilah-h @rae

Silvanis does have a plan in all this. Don’t worry, he’d never let serious harm come to Fairy.

I was starting to wonder at the end there lol

Trevor

“Great plan, Trevor, just omit the Silvanis and Sniper part. Fairy will handle it alone. If anyone disagrees, they answer to me.” As Silvanis said this, his skin began to glow.…[Read more]

@highscribeofaetherium @rae @jonas @loopylin @thearcaneaxiom @savannah_grace2009 @linus-smallprint @theshadow @princesachronicle22 @ellette-giselle @whalekeeper @stephie @grcr @esther-c @theloonyone @ava-blue @hybridlore @keilah-h @koshka @livingwoodchronicles @freed_and_redeemed

Would anyone like to see the cover of my newest book I’m about…[Read more]

@keilah-h @theshadow @highscribeofaetherium @grcr @mineralizedwritings @loopylin @theducktator @grcr @rae

Congratulations everyone!

Yeah, when I saw GRCR I thought, “Game over, that’s the winner” lol. It was an amazing rendition of him!! Great job!!

Who would like to submit the next description?

I would unless someone else is going…[Read more]