Ruth

Okay, guys…I’m just going to start tagging everyone I can think of lol

Would anyone be interested in reading through/critiquing/giving suggestions on my WIP?

I love writing, but it’s hard to write when I’m not sure if people would even be interested in reading it or if it’s actually trash lollll

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@whalekeeper

Thanks!!!

Aubrielle’s her older sister.

@rae

Amazing scene! And I agree with Whaley. Not too repetitive, but maybe substitute a few of those “Fathers” with something like, “The man” or something. Not too much of that either, but just enough to brake up the monotony of “Father”

@savannah_grace2009

Ooh I love desert settings! Too bad Liv doesn’t feel the same way – and too bad she is so exhausted, for that matter. Is this sister older or younger than her?

@rae

I don’t think it’s too repetitive, except for this bit at the beginning:

Baron knocked and entered his Father’s quarters. He knelt. “You sent for me, Fat…

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@keilah-h Thanks! It’s a newish WIP that my sister and I came up with last year (she says like that was so long ago. XD). It doesn’t have a title yet, but it’s currently Project Crowns.

@keilah-h Thanks! It’s a newish WIP that my sister and I came up with last year (like that was so long ago. XD). It doesn’t have a title yet, but it’s currently Project Crowns.

@keilah-h

H: Oh yeah, and you were humming “Fly me to the moon” three days ago and I’m sure you did it where I could hear on purpose, because you know I like that style of music and it’s the song that first got me thinking that maybe you liked me back.

S: When ya threw a chair at me while I was practicin’ the sax outside?

H: Yeah, exactly.

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Aw :/ so sad *cries*

@keilah-h

Thanks!! 😄

@savannah_grace2009 nope, sorry.

@keilah-h

Do you have a pinterest account? If you’re logged in it should work.

@savannah_grace2009 huh, your link isn’t working.

@keilah-h @anyone-else

If you want to know what things in my book look like, like people, places, etc, here’s a link to my pinterest! I have a lot of boards with pictures that describe several characters and races in my book!

https://pin.it/3TYRfqUSE

@keilah-h

Yeah, he’s pretty cool!!!!!!!! <3 I love Xandro

@savannah_grace2009 ooooh that looks so pretty!

@keilah-h

Here’s a good pic of what he’d look like:

@freed_and_redeemed

it’s kinda interesting that you bring this up, bc it’s at least hinted at in the MCU that Steve was raised Christian

 

“There’s only one God, ma’am, and I’m pretty sure he doesn’t dress like that.”

 

And in the comics, it was canon that Steve was raised Catholic by his Irish mother, and I also found it really interest…

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“By either rain or sweat, you’re gonna get wet.” –Singaporean saying that also applies to Florida (where I come from)

“While on a cruise or vacation, don’t be that guy and you’ll have a great time”–another saying

@koshka ooh interesting!! What story is this?