Ruth

@hybridlore Thanks XD  I needed the motivation. I got a part of a scene that’s been stuck in my head out finally.

If I had any other older snowballs, I’m just going to forget about them lol

@stephie

Yay!!!!

@stephie

You’re so welcome xD

@theducktator

*gasp* It’s a date!

Yes!! 🤭 In my first draft I actually never wrote a scene of their first study sesh together…do you think I should add that in for the second draft??

When what, Tyler? 👀 I want to know…

I would like to know as well… 🤣

Definitely left that open for the imagination or a future short story &#x1f44…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Ok, so I told you I’d finish reading your book by the end of February, and I did! But I only started like two days ago. 🤣 Here are my thoughts! (Excuse any typos, I was doing this in the car, lol!)

Ok, so the biggest thing I noticed was the lack of hope throughout the story. The characters seemed to think about death a lot…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Okay! I could always try to integrate that into scenes while they’re traveling (to the church meetings, to their jobs).

That sounds good.

Gotcha. I’ll try to add some more of that in.

Cool, I’ll look out for it.

@rae

Probably Baron himself. I love Rya though; she’s adorable.

@rae

I just read through all of this and enjoyed it immensely. 😃 I love your characters so much!

@ellette-giselle

and then he just magically wins.

Hehe, I no longer get angry, just amused.

@ellette-giselle

Oooh, I love Puss in Boots, especially the Last Wish. That movie was as good as the second Spiderverse, imo.

@the_lost-journal

(where this super cool person is wearing a mask and then they remove their mask and its a GIRL 😮

I think of Samurai X and Faith from Ninjago. They did it twice, several seasons apart.

@freed_and_redeemed

I have this forum open on my laptop. I’m gonna tag you to see if you’re able to find it again. If not, oh well. Just thought I’d give it a try! 😉

@the_lost-journal

You can also do that but do “is this a female” because that seems to be popular theme XD

(where this super cool person is wearing a mask and then they remove their mask and its a GIRL 😮

Immediately comes to mind…….

@whalekeeper

Oh, did you have a subplot POV on the side following the rescue?

No, two of my side characters were spies and they kept reporting the enemy and allies movements back to the MC. Plus, at one point when the MC was captured two of the officers get a message and kind of act startled. They leave the room, but the reader hardly notices…[Read more]

@theducktator

Kid’s medicine tastes so good though!!! You’re right!

@theducktator @keilah-h

I’m on book eight, if my memory serves me well. I decided there was such a nagging balance of potential and problems, that I wanted to re-world-build the elf world. If you ever get any ideas for the redesign, let me know.

@ellette-giselle

In the second book everyone knew rescue was coming, and it was a race against time. All hope seems lost, but in the last moment rescue comes and that’s when you find out that the villains had already lost the war and were under order to release prisoners but were trying to off the MC at the last moment.

Oh, did you have a s…[Read more]

@koshka

 Liko could get stuff done, right? The fellow certainly had enough hands.

*snorts*

@loopylin

Ooh, I like Terry. The problem with names from this era is that so many of them are taken by adults I know. XD