Ruth

@elishavet-pidyon

I decided I loved it when Kyler sent Jace flying into the mystery visitor. XD

😂 Yay!

There were several places where either the syntax or word choice made the little reading voice in my head stumble, so I’ll come back and note those,

Great! I will look forward to those. I actually went over the doc and changed some of those t…[Read more]

Father figures are so often my favorite character and yet they always end up dead. 😭

@keilah-h

Hmmm…I really like Father Nicolas from a rather dead wip. I’m also writing a dad by the name of Lotan Linder. I like him so much he just avoided dying where he originally was going to die. I haven’t figured out how yet, but the one character who has two loving and living parents gets to keep them. Also Ryla’s grandfather…he’s weird…[Read more]

@rae @theshadow you two are probably the only ones who will find this funny

So I’m currently writing a version of the story I shared with you guys, but from Sniper’s perspective; it’ll start from shortly before he joined the team and continue throughout everything. I decided to include an intro similar to the one Huntress has in her version of…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon

😆 I’m excited to hear what you say!

Don’t worry…I sometimes miss things too.

idk who this guy is but he looks a little like my profile picture lollllll

@ellette-giselle

Oh, lol.

@hybridlore

Oh. Duh.

I was thinking in response to Jonathan falling. I didn’t even think of the other chapter.

@ellette-giselle

Yeah…. Totally. *shakes head vigorously *

His backstory. First time we get to hear what happened to him.

@hybridlore

What?!?! But Rick is so sweet and nice!!

*stares at you with total deadpan face*

Poor Jim? Why poor Jim?

Thanks so much!

@ellette-giselle

Augh! Really??

Rick is not a nice guy. 😠 And poor Jim!!

I love the dynamics you have going.

@koshka

Up to you. If you want, you could post it wherever you’ll be posting everything else.

I don’t remember if you were planning on sharing your full writing, but if you are, having someone else who knows where you’re going could be useful for feedback, but otherwise I guess it’s just for your own reference.

@hybridlore     @koshka     @keilah-h       @elishavet-pidyon       @theducktator     @grcr   @whalekeeper

NEXT CHAPTERS!!!

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@jonas

Awesome! What do I do with my outline now that it’s written? Do you want it submitted somewhere?

@grcr @loopylin @elishavet-pidyon @highscribeofaetherium @rae @koshka @whalekeeper

Okay, today is the “official” start! The goal was for outlines to be done today if you were doing one, but obviously if you need to keep working on it, that’s fine as well. First chapters (i.e. how ever much you want to do as your first chunk) are “due” in a…[Read more]

@theducktator

No worries! Thanks for getting back to me, though.

Great! From the three POVs, how would you describe those three fellows? Zahn, Kyler, and Guy.

@elishavet-pidyon XD love it when the quiet characters have a secret explosive temper.

I am very much struggling to think of what the experiment should be, sorry. I failed chemistry two years in a row in school so I’m not really the best at this lol

@ellette-giselle awww yes!! I remember him.

@keilah-h

Probably Don.

I love him so much.