RAE

@everyone

It doesn’t seem like too many people have been posting, but for those of you that have, I apologize for having been absent for a while. I’ve been a bit busy lately, but with Thanksgiving break coming up, I’ll probably have time to get on here.

I would post now, but I’ve sort of lost track of what’s happening, so it will take me a bit…[Read more]

@whalekeeper @jonas @loopylin @hybridlore @ellette-giselle @rae @grcr

Ben Gunn and Flare – Group 1, Everstrand edge

Flare and Ben looked at on another. They nodded. Off they went towards the river jumping roof over roof.

Ben felt tired, of course he’s tired, he’s old. I’m getting too old for this, Ben thought as he landed on a roof, catching h…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

Yippy! Stripe was HUGGED!!!!

AWWWWW! it was soooooo cute!!!!!! Now you have to draw a picture of it!!!

Aside from Stripe being hugged, I really enjoyed the chapter.I’m glad you brought the crow back in. I was wondering how long it would be before you tied that part of the plot back into the story.

Also, one…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon

Woah, are you accusing me of being a sadist?

lololololol.

Thanks I’ll check it out!

@mineralizedwritings

Oh, he is.🤣 I’ll have to remember that.

@mineralizedwritings

Our entire conversation was weird.🤣 He also randomly speaks in a British accent during co-op, so yeah. XD

@mineralizedwritings

Thanks! That last word is supposed to be my name, I think. I’m Abby.

@mineralizedwritings

My favorite bird I’ve ever seen is probably a Brown Booby. I live in the middle of Indiana, and I’m not sure how this bird got here, but he was at a state park 2 hours from my house, and my parents agreed to take a detour on our way to vacation. It was so cool!!!! And a couple days ago I saw my first Eastern Towhee, so…[Read more]

I’m no longer surprised when a character is taken/died. In fact, I was expecting it any time now. That’s not good.

Is it though? I mean sure, in modern storytelling that is a thing to reserve for smacking readers with, but could the fact that no one is safe almost be a shock in in of itself? Maybe I’ve read too much from early church histo…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

thanks so much for this feedback.

im not going to say anything so as not to shed light on which path i take, but i will say that it was extremely helpful knowing your thoughts.

thanks again!

@liberty

I̶̡̨͖̳̮͓͎̱͎͍̻͍̖͖͇̭͎̪͈̯͔̼͔̗̥̙͇̹̼̭̥̖̥͎͔̘̥͎͚̣̞͇͈̖̤̎͊́͛̇̂̈́̉̓̚̕ ̷̧̧͕̜̺͕̝̻̤͎̼̤̫̹̩̖̲̤̤̪̜̺̘͙̤̤̣̰́͗̉̑̔̏̀̈́̀͌̀́̿͊̽̄͌̀̈̉̈́̓̔͊̆͐…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

Why was I expecting this to be something positive?

You should know me better than that.

It kind of made the event feel like a slap. (Ouch. I’m feeling Josephs pain.)

Perfect! That’s exactly what I wanted.

It also feels more tragic because of how casually Eric and Asher headed out. It was just a normal day.

Ah yes. Poor b…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon

@hybridlore

Drat.

KP isn’t letting me know that y’all responded!

Grrr.

Hmm, it looks like I really stirred it up around here. lol.

@ellette-giselle

Ha! I got it right!

😢😢 Please tell me Eric and Asher don’t die too. There is too much death in this book. 😭

Oops! I fathom ya’ll be the wrong people folk!

🏃‍♂️💨

@hybridlore   @linus-smallprint    @koshka   @keilah-h    @elishavet-pidyon   @grcr

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Sorry it’s so short.

Joseph woke. For a long moment he lay, trying to figure out what was happening and where he was. He had been so exhausted he didn’t even remember lying down. There was an odd sound, a sound he knew he had heard many times be…

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@ellette-giselle

😐😶

@grcr

Many that live deserve death. And some that die deserve life.

~J.R.R. Tolkien.

@ellette-giselle

You shouldn’t kill them because they don’t deserve it.

And it’d be very uncalled for.

And because I really like them.

(I am reading—I’ve caught up and all—I just don’t really have anything to say.)