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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 hours, 45 minutes ago
WHOOHOO!!!!! 🥳🎉
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 hours, 47 minutes ago
Oh good grief.
I’m gonna do it.
I’m gonna save him.
Eric’s gonna live.
How on earth did you get me to do that?
I can’t believe I’m going to do this.
You are dangerous.
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whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 hours, 47 minutes ago
Haha
I vote give the character whichever ending highlights their unique story/perspective the most. For some characters, that’s a dramatic sacrifice. But there are lots of differences in characters, so I try to give each character their own ending, lol.
Ignoring that discussion (since I’m guessing you’re over your head in the…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 hours, 50 minutes ago
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 hours, 53 minutes ago
Yeah. That makes sense.
Like the Imperial officers would just stand by and let him.
I know, but he could at least try. I think it would make his death more meaningful and give a bigger impact. But it’s up to you.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 hours, 55 minutes ago
She’s the first person to ever get me to reconsider killing a character.
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whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 hours, 58 minutes ago
Also @ellette-giselle @hybridlore I just saw your character death intervention and I’m quite entertained by it. 😂 Y’all are feeding the #savethecharrie movement. People on here never change.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 hours ago
True. I’m not denying that he isn’t young. He’s just not shockingly young. Especially in that age and culture, he’s considered a man and could have a family and kids.
Eric is still a kid in there eyes.
And no, i can’t change the age because i’d have to do rewrites in the first book and I don’t want to. lol. plus, that makies him…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 hours, 5 minutes ago
Yeah, good point. Is there a way you could adjust his age, or is that set in stone?
Hmm… yeah, it could still work as a wake-up call, even if Asher’s not that young. To be honest, nineteen is pretty young to be executed though, especially if he (a.) wasn’t a soldier that betrayed their country, like Adrian, and (b.) has a young…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 hours, 18 minutes ago
Hmm. I guess I was trying to cross over the LTBL goal into this without clearly stating that. It’s hard, because Joseph has a tendency to lean toward a survival mindset (no one can really blame him) and the story is his POV.
UGH, I can see the Eric thing both ways. I could still use his almost death as a “wakeup call” and it…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 hours, 23 minutes ago
He’s not THAT young. Adrian was younger then him when he died.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 hours, 28 minutes ago
Hey, all the reasons people wanted to save Eric could apply to Asher too. He’s also young. He looks innocent… lol. Make them react more to both of them instead of just the younger one, maybe?
OR highlight how hurt Eric is by Asher’s death in front of the crowd. That’ll make them see how much it’s affecting families and hurting c…[Read more]
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TheShadow replied to the topic Animal RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 hours, 48 minutes ago
Introducing my only animal I could find, Rune.
Rune is a silver fox that can speak telepathically. She’s about the size of a normal fox, though bigger and more intelligent than a normal one. She’s very reserved and perceptive, if not a bit straightforward. Idk about the rest of her personality, she didn’t have much to begin with so we…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 hours, 51 minutes ago
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Andrew McLaurin replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 hours, 55 minutes ago
lol, no problem
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TheShadow replied to the topic Question about religion in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 11 hours, 56 minutes ago
Not yet, I should though.
That’s a good response, I feel like that’s hard to do sometimes though when human minds constantly want answers.
This definitely did help, thanks.
Thanks, those are interesting points.
You’re right, the devil is kind of overrated when compared to God’s…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 hours, 58 minutes ago
This is a really random question and I doubt anyone will be able to answer it; does anyone have experience with theremins? And with purchasing one?
I’m buying one for my birthday and need to do a lot of research first. I once invented a character who plays it, and it’s always been a nostalgic instrument for me. :]
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 12 hours, 1 minute ago
Thank you for babysitting my sack of potatoes 😊
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 12 hours, 8 minutes ago
lololol
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 12 hours, 9 minutes ago
Stop it.
Go away.
I literally have my finger hanging over the delete button for that scene.
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