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@savannah_grace2009

I’d be willing to help for sure! I may not have a tone of time, but I’ll do what I can!

@savannah_grace2009

Sure thing! I may not be able to get it to right away…at least all of it, but I’m willing to help you!

Okay, guys…I’m just going to start tagging everyone I can think of lol

Would anyone be interested in reading through/critiquing/giving suggestions on my WIP?

I love writing, but it’s hard to write when I’m not sure if people would even be interested in reading it or if it’s actually trash lollll

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@whalekeeper

Thanks!!!

Aubrielle’s her older sister.

@rae

Amazing scene! And I agree with Whaley. Not too repetitive, but maybe substitute a few of those “Fathers” with something like, “The man” or something. Not too much of that either, but just enough to brake up the monotony of “Father”

@savannah_grace2009

Ooh I love desert settings! Too bad Liv doesn’t feel the same way – and too bad she is so exhausted, for that matter. Is this sister older or younger than her?

@rae

I don’t think it’s too repetitive, except for this bit at the beginning:

Baron knocked and entered his Father’s quarters. He knelt. “You sent for me, Fat…

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@keilah-h Thanks! It’s a newish WIP that my sister and I came up with last year (she says like that was so long ago. XD). It doesn’t have a title yet, but it’s currently Project Crowns.

@keilah-h Thanks! It’s a newish WIP that my sister and I came up with last year (like that was so long ago. XD). It doesn’t have a title yet, but it’s currently Project Crowns.

@keilah-h

H: Oh yeah, and you were humming “Fly me to the moon” three days ago and I’m sure you did it where I could hear on purpose, because you know I like that style of music and it’s the song that first got me thinking that maybe you liked me back.

S: When ya threw a chair at me while I was practicin’ the sax outside?

H: Yeah, exactly.

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Aw :/ so sad *cries*

@keilah-h

Thanks!! 😄

@savannah_grace2009 nope, sorry.

@keilah-h

Do you have a pinterest account? If you’re logged in it should work.

@savannah_grace2009 huh, your link isn’t working.

@keilah-h @anyone-else

If you want to know what things in my book look like, like people, places, etc, here’s a link to my pinterest! I have a lot of boards with pictures that describe several characters and races in my book!

https://pin.it/3TYRfqUSE

@keilah-h

Yeah, he’s pretty cool!!!!!!!! <3 I love Xandro

@savannah_grace2009 ooooh that looks so pretty!

@keilah-h

Here’s a good pic of what he’d look like: