Ruth

@savannah_grace2009

I’m currently on chapter 9, and so far I think the pacing is good. I’ll get some more thoughts to you later.

Also, question. Are you planning on making Livia a main character in this draft?

@theducktator lol that’s their usual dynamic

Also I should warn you guys…

My book is a *little* dark. There’s mentions of abuse, slavery, and cruelty, as well as evil and violence.

It’s not graphic. I had my mom read  it and she said I wrote it “tactfully”, because it got the point across without being too graphic or descriptive.

But just thought I’d say that if you guys are really…[Read more]

@liberty and @everyone

Is there anything specific you want us looking for?

I’m not sure….

I’m just wanting to know if the plot makes sense at all, or if it’s all over the place.

In other drafts, I used to just throw the characters at you, but now I’m trying to establish them more distinctly.

So basically…I just want to know if all the…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Aw thank you so much girl <3 that means a lot!!!!!!!!!!!

And don’t worry about it!!!!! If you can, yeah, just let me know!

@savannah_grace2009

I might be able to read it, but I’ll try to get back to you if/when I start.

Don’t let yourself think that you or your writing isn’t valuable, even if no one is reading it at the moment. You’re an amazing writer, and if God wants you to use that talent right now, He’ll help you to write what he wants you to.

“You didn’t even make ambulance noises!”-me

“Slothy doesn’t like going to the doctor because last time she had her back pulled out and stuffed full of donuts.”-my cousin

@whalekeeper

Lolllll

@savannah_grace2009

Is there anything specific you want us looking for?

I had to share this message I got from my grandma this evening.

…Their house is down the street from us. 🤣🤣 My grandmother lives for socializing.

@keilah-h

Okay!!!

Sounds good!!!!!!

Btw did you see I added chapter titles?

@savannah_grace2009 All righty! I’ll have to write some part of it for you to read.

and yeah I read fast lol

I’ll have to critique it fully tomorrow cause I don’t have time to type out a whole thing but I will get you that feedback!

@rae oh yeah and Alpha and Silvanis arguing sounds crazy.

why can I see a pair of angry Night Furies roaring at each other as the image of how that debate would go?

@rae

Lol, we’re talking about charries as if they’re children or siblings now

They kind of are XD

We make fun of each other. There have been times I’m in a conversation with other people and we’re talking about annoying things, and I’ll go like “You hear that Silvanis? That sounds just like you!”. He usually growls back or makes a stab of his own.

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@rae thank you!! Glad you liked it, and yes I can agree the ending was amazing; when I read the original I was like “oh I gotta have this, it’s great”

I actually added the comic artist’s appearance; in the original, it simply shows them all talking and then the doorbell rings, then it switches to a panel of a door, then Scout opening the door an…[Read more]

@smiley

of if I ever go onto the websites I put it at lowest and sometimes the second lowest age rating cause anything above that is awful

Smart.

but overall I just don’t go on them cause nobody ever finishes them anyways lol

Lol yeah.

@whalekeeper

I actually love that Liv is younger but thought to herself that Aubrielle needs the resources more. It’s only a little contrast (to the ‘save the resources for the youngest’ trope) but does a lot to show her personality.

Aww thanks!!! That means a lot <3

Yeah Liv’s pretty sweet!!!! I love her so muchhhh

@keilah-h

Yes I’d read it!!!!!!!