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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Portals: When My Story Ate Me in the forum General Writing Discussions 22 hours, 34 minutes ago
It’s not so much the words as Onnendel’s reaction. Or the way it was written. If yoy could do this:
“Him!” Travenor spun to kick the body again, eyes flashing steel grey. He stepped across to Onnendel. “It was Him.”
Onnendel did not move. He simply gazed at Travenor with his clouded eyes and a gravity that ache…
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Andrew replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 22 hours, 36 minutes ago
That signature is more for me, lol, since I forget to eat breakfast until like 2… HEY! We’re pretty similar! @rae now I’m not the only one you have to worry about, lol
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 22 hours, 39 minutes ago
Awesome!!!!
STOP!!!!!!! Have you eaten Breakfast???
lol. No. I don’t do that until closer to 2:00 in the afternoon………………….
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 22 hours, 41 minutes ago
Yeah……… unless I do it to Werner.
Also, HUSH! Don’t blow my cover!
I refer to you two as the twins because you’re the only twins I know and…. idk. It’s easier because not everyone knows your real names, and I’d end up slipping and saying them instead of your KP names, so I just call you the twins.
As for Power,…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Denomination Q and A in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 22 hours, 46 minutes ago
Yeah, I get what you both are saying. I feel like church should be a place where you gather with your family (brothers and sisters in Christ) and if church is leaving you wanting more….. I don’t know. For some reason that feels wrong to me. Maybe not. Maybe I’m just so used to my church that it’s hard to see things d…[Read more]
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Andrew posted an update 22 hours, 50 minutes ago
@theducktator @rae
It’s national squirrel appreciation day! -
Koshka replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 23 hours, 2 minutes ago
Erm…….he probably thinks that’s great…..
*Whips around towards door and screams*
Ellette, what have you been saying?!
XD
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Loopylin replied to the topic Magic Systems in the forum General Writing Discussions 23 hours, 6 minutes ago
AHHH YOU HOPPED ON THE TREND TOOOOO
THIS TREND SLAAAAAAYYYYS ✨
but most of the time they can simply pull moisture from the air and rehydrate.
Mooooost of the time. Except when they’re in the desert. 😁 Or if they get freeze-dried and packaged. (That got dark…)
If a Pitt can’t sing, they can’t control the plants as they do not…
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Loopylin replied to the topic Magic Systems in the forum General Writing Discussions 23 hours, 22 minutes ago
They don’t have blood, but if cut the wound will spill light that in turn heals it.
That’s some cool concept imagery. 😎
So there are “laws unbreakable” like the cost of reason and the concept of ransom blood which are deep in the fabric of the world.
How does the concept of ransom blood work? What are some of the other unbre…[Read more]
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Loopylin replied to the topic Magic Systems in the forum General Writing Discussions 23 hours, 34 minutes ago
Literally everyone loves your concept, so you’ve got originality conquered and in the bag, girl. XD
I love it so much but it loves to frustrate me and taunt me with its vagueness. Maybe you guys could help me make it make sense?
Ideas ideas
– An Ink drawing melts away after a certain time limit
– After the artist draws something, they…[Read more]
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Loopylin replied to the topic Magic Systems in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day ago
Thanks for the debriefing! I’ve read up on these concepts before, but it’s been so long since I focused on them, that I felt you were better able to summarize these things.
Of these, I think effects is actually the least important. Access and costs can both be very important, but cost probably a bit more so.
Definitely agree with this. Any…[Read more]
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Liberty replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 1 hour ago
It’s even funnier that Power is your brother. When I heard that, my heart nearly stopped. Then I burst into hysterical laughter!!!!!! And his age!! That shocked me even more! I think I’ll have to change a few things in Dale’s Kingdom Pen story because I described Power as a teenage boy!!!! In my mind, he seemed to be 14…or 15…I hope…[Read more]
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Andrew replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 day, 1 hour ago
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The Most Esteemed Feathered One posted an update 1 day, 9 hours ago
HIRING: SKILLED KIDNAPPER
Someone PLEASE kidnap me for tomorrow evening! We’re having meatball stroganoff, and I’d rather eat locusts and honey like John the Baptist! *incoherent screaming* I’ll pay in candy! -
Andrew replied to the topic Magic Systems in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 12 hours ago
Are the runes like tattoos on the characters’ skin? Or are they magical symbols seared into the characters’ minds? Basically how do the runes manifest physically, if at all?
So someone must be born with runes, and the runes are technically birthmarks, but they look more like tattoos.
On a non-living object the process can be dif…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 day, 12 hours ago
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 day, 13 hours ago
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hybridlore replied to the topic Portals: When My Story Ate Me in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 13 hours ago
Apparently my feet changed that, which meant my story was changing itself. A terrifying thought indeed.
Dun … dun… DUN!!! XD
Nice segment. Interested to see where it goes next…
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Keilah H. replied to the topic How do you world build? in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 14 hours ago
ooh yes, the Pardalis.
Hmm… I don’t know! I’ve always called Pyro “he” but if he turned out to be a she, I wouldn’t be too surprised.
Here’s the fic!
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1SXigHpJueaZyEEgR0myaKj5O-jRh7X2ko6EgxZAy5JM/edit?usp=sharing
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How do I celebrate National Squirrel Appreciation day when all my kitties have chased (or eaten) all the squirrels in our yard?
Idk, just say happy squirrel day
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I don’t think the squirrels are very happy with me for keeping my kitties around.
Don’t worry, as King of the squirrels, I said abandon the place and find somewhere else to live, and don’t have hard feeling for Ruth and her family 👍
thx, lol
I cannot and will not appreciate those mini monsters.
Just like you shouldn’t appreciate those floating birds? Oh wait, my bad they’re not similar since squirrels are better.
Lol, we’re back to our silly/playful argument that we started like three months ago 🤣🤣