Ruth

Yay……

*begins to draw*

*loves the lineart*

*scared to color*

@rae

Um, black doesn’t count… even if I have to use it a lot, right? I have my three colors, but my picture needs a lot of black, and for more than outlines and such… does that break the rule??

Also yours is really pretty!! I love it so much!! 😍

@theshadow

I don’t know

@linus-smallprint @ellette-giselle @koshka @whalekeeper @theshadow @keilah-h @theducktator

New chapter on the doc. 😉

Also, TCoH reached 50k on Saturday!! 🥳

@hybridlore

Okay sure. That works.

@ellette-giselle

Oh yeah. Pretty crazy.

Okay, I gotcha. Maybe rewording it would make the sentence more clear?

“I need to take my boots off,” Julian moaned. “But I can’t get up.”

@hybridlore

Thanks!!

Was the little assassination attempt unexpected?

Ah, it was just guy banter. Happens a lot in my house. In fact, that one was directly copied from a conversation between my brothers. One of them was falling asleep on the sofa, but he wanted to stay up with the other one who was completing a test. Julian is insisting…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Wow. That was a great speech!

I like the section. Didn’t really see much except for this, which was confusing…

“I can’t get up,” Julian moaned. “I need to take my boots off.”

But yeah, great job overall! Things are really getting interesting!

@theshadow

Hm, tags seem to be working kind of weird. Our names are not in blue, but I still got an email. 🤔

Absolutely! That seems like it would work great. Let me know when you send out the link!

@hybridlore  @linus-smallprint    @koshka   @keilah-h    @elishavet-pidyon   @liberty

NEXT SECTION!!

Over the next few days, many came to Christ due to the events in the city square. The Sabbath came, and Leon eagerly watched for Marius and the prince. They arrived, and Leon greeted Dietrich, slapping him on the back. “How are you two?…

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@keilah-h

(yep I’m leaning fully into it now)

Oh boy XD

What have I done lol

@keilah-h @hybridlore @ellette-giselle @the_lost-journal @liberty @whalekeeper @linus-smallprint

As of right now, I have re-done parts of The Woods of Rosen which are now integral to where the story is headed (this is because I realized they would work better for the story and characters). So, I’m thinking instead of posting the chapters of the b…[Read more]

@theshadow nah mate, you’re fine

(yep I’m leaning fully into it now)

thanks!

@grcr

just gotta pop on here to say…

Rax looks AMAZING🤩🤩🤩 girl, you are sooooo talented

@keilah-h

look what you’ve done you’ve encouraged my obsession lollllllll

Wait, nooo!! I take it back, is it too late?! lol

Also it’s a-okay, I think this topic is kind dead anyway XD

@linus-smallprint

XD No worries. Seems like it worked pretty well!

@liberty

Oh yay!!! I’m so happy!!!

Diedrich is such a great character. 🤣

Yeah, poor Leon seems to get all the trouble, even though Julian is the reckless one. 😝

I’m glad you liked the letters. I do too. I feel like it helps to keep the connection of the previous towns.

@ellette-giselle

That was awesome!!! I really got sucked into the story again! I was shrinking inwardly for Leon! I thought he really was going to get whipped…again! Then when Dietrich came…I celebrated!!! So awesome!

I also like how you show Leon and Julian admonishing and encouraging the believers from the previous towns. It’s nice to…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

Another teenage boy? How many does she have and why is she introducing another one?

Dude. You are so mean. 😝

Yes, you’re right. I can’t just go change his age. Thank you!

Yes, but Wilhelm is the traditional spelling. 😁 (you still say it Vwilhelm)

Having the heir to the throne on your side is helpful. But I’m sure t…

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@linus-smallprint

Oh my word!!!! BUT IT’S SO TRUE!!!!! *sobs*

🤣🤣

@the_lost-journal yep! And then share your stories with people and ask them what they thought and if there’s anything they think can change. You don’t have to follow their suggestions if you think it’ll conflict with the story, but if several people are all giving you the same or similar feedback, it’s a good idea to at least check out why.