Ruth

@ellette-giselle

My gosh, you have a lot of questions! 😂 Now I don’t feel bad for having a lot of questions for my stories!

@hybridlore

For some reason, Ian and Albee seemed really well developed, even though we didn’t get to see them for very long.

Yes! That’s exactly what I think as well!

@ellette-giselle

~Which character(s) did you find the most compelling/relatable/believable and why?

For me, I would say I related the most to Conrad. That’s probably because I’ve had doubts before, like him, and faced fears and uncertainties.

I would also relate to Julian in certain areas since I am kind of like him.

I thought that Dian was a…[Read more]

@liberty

Okay that makes sense.

That is totally how I plan to have this structured, but at that time, many of the men were hearing about God for the first time, and the Bible talks about leaders and teachers being strong in their faith and well rooted in belief before they teach.

@ellette-giselle

Not sure why…. but for some reason I’m not understanding this. Is there a typo…. or am I really crazy?

26 How is it then, brethren? Whenever you come together, each of you has a psalm, has a teaching, has a tongue, has a revelation, has an interpretation. Let all things be done for [a]edification.

When the church came together…[Read more]

@hybridlore

@keilah-h

Thank you for the feedback!

@liberty

Sorry!!!

You should have chosen an MC as your favorite. They actually all survived this time. 😂

I was like, oh no, she’s gonna love him and he’s gonna die. (he’s my favorite too, so we can cry together)

I have a bunch of books about fashions of the 1900s waiting at my library to help me with worldbuilding. 🙂

@ellette-giselle

Okay…

I was not expecting that. Especially at the end of the book!!!! You just crushed my heart again by killing another favorite character…

Despite the heart-wrenching deaths of *sob* the prince and his friend…it was a great ending and I’m intrigued by this mysterious character who wrote the letter.

@ellette-giselle

NOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!! 😭😭😭😭

I was utterly shocked…stunned…I even started to cry again!!!!!!

I said I hoped you didn’t kill him…..*sobbing*

That’s all I can say right now…

@ellette-giselle

~Which character(s) did you find the most compelling/relatable/believable and why?

Julian, Leon, and Ian. I also liked Albee. For some reason, Ian and Albee seemed really well developed, even though we didn’t get to see them for very long. Otherwise, mostly Julian and Leon, since I know them the best.

~ Were there any character…

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@the_lost-journal I don’t see why not. As long as it’s your art and you didn’t just like trace it or something.

Characters:

~Which character(s) did you find the most compelling/relatable/believable and why?

I liked pretty much all of the main cast.

~ Were there any characters that need to be more engaging? If so, how would be some good ways for me to do that?

Not that I remember. If there were, they weren’t important enough to the story to be a big…[Read more]

@grcr you’re welcome! you have great art!

@ellette-giselle

ohhhh okay! Hmmm, would the Emperor be particularly happy with that? Like I know he probably was a follower of the pagan gods and wouldn’t like the true God in his son’s life, but I feel like he’d at least be upset that his only heir is dead.

Could also have it like in Daniel, with Darius and the sneaky advisors, where he kinda…[Read more]

@grcr

That’s really cool.

I know it would be a ton of work, but it’s beautiful. If you do get a comic book published, I’d buy it.

@koshka

Thank you!! 💛💛

Yeah, it would.

Not normal for western comics, but that’s how Japanese mangas are—at least as far as I’ve seen. It’s got to do with the language it’s written in. Western/English comics read left to right because thats how English reads.

Japanese mangas/comics read the other way… which is cooler imo and why i did tha…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Lolol 😄 Thanks!!

@grcr

That looks so good! And like a ton of work. Wow.

So would the book open to the left? Is that a normal thing for comic books (*has no clue since current comic expirence  is nearly non-existent*)?

@keilah-h

I hope so too! It’s up to the others if they’re read for the next one.

Although, one question. Was the Christian prince the only one? Who’s gonna inherit the throne when the Emperor dies now? (Don’t tell me the priests have tried to make it so one of them will get it.)

Dietrich was sole heir. His brother died as a baby.

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