Ruth

@keilah-h    @linus-smallprint    @hybridlore

Okay, here’s a question for y’all.

So, I personally really like Julian’s speech/sermon, whatever it is. (I cringe when y’all say sermon because I’m a woman and I wrote it. But I guess Julian is a guy. 🤣) Anyhow, I really like some of the themes it hits, I like the flow. Basically, I perso…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Well, first off, this is Julian we’re talking about. Leon had more understanding for them. Second, this is really their first time going through something like this. The last time was in Ardenta, and Ardentans have a certain brute stubbornness and willingness to just hang on that a lot of other cultures don’t. (That’s part of why…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

I don’t know who fell apart worse, them or the church in Clonabay.

Julian’s sermon is fine, but I think he needs to remind them more of what they are fighting for. What the reward in heavan will be.

mkay, that works. I’ll try to pull some of that in.

Have these three actually been participating in idol worship, or is J…

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@hybridlore

Hmm, the problem is, I’m trying not to drag things like “greek” and “hebrew” in because that muddies the world a bit because it is technically an alternate reality.

Well, it’s a bit of a chopped up version (due to space. Who made the rule of 100 characters anyways?!) But it’s a Chesterton quote that reads,

“The great march of…[Read more]

My dad is flying tomorrow morning, (at like 4 something) and then home on Saturday. There have been quite a few airplane accidents recently, so prayers for his safety please!

@the_lost-journal

Leander was about to reach the top, when a strange looking vine started crawling towards him. Leander moved away from it, but there was another one coming from the other side. Leander was surrounded by the snake like vines.

Hey, you read my mind! I was going to say that the hedges did something like this when anyone tried to…[Read more]

*Notices were already on page 3* Okay, I’ll touch on this soon. I’m drawing right now. XD

I forgot tagsss

@rae @the_lost-journal @whalekeeper @highscribeofaetherium @theducktator ^^^

Omniscient

The tiny man standing before the group of strangers held his showman-like pose and waited expectantly. There was a long silence. Someone coughed.

“Oof. Tough crowd.” The man said defeatedly.

“Who are you?” Someone from the small crowd finally spoke up. It was a tall, white haired girl.

“And where are we?” A curly haired boy who was…[Read more]

Other than that, this is a good section, and connects well with your previous ones.

@ellette-giselle

Julian’s sermon is fine, but I think he needs to remind them more of what they are fighting for. What the reward in heaven will be. These guys are scared and they need a reminder that they don’t need to worry and God will protect them, even if they die. They need to know that it will be worth it, and this can help them see tha…

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Oh wow I’m glad so many people are interested! Would you guys like me to write something for some of my characters first to get things moving?

Also, side note, the little imp guy is not a character anyone can write for. He will just be my character and he will act as a sort of guide to the others.

@ellette-giselle

Gotcha. You might want to try to clarify the definition a little more, but I would see what others like Linus think.

What does your signature mean, by the way?

@hybridlore

Thanks.Yeah, they’re like right at the center of everything, so it’s not easy.

Ah, yes. It was a run-on sentence into the next paragraph, and I tried to clean it up with punctuation and forgot to change some words.

The definitions are the literal Greek translations for that word. There are two words in Greek that make up…[Read more]

@keilah-h ^^

@linus-smallprint @ellette-giselle@keilah-h @theducktator

New chapters! I’m getting a little short on my supply so I’ll probably start posting singles instead of doubles every week soon. The past few weeks have been busy, but hopefully I’ll start writing again soon.

@ellette-giselle

I like how Konner and the others are afraid of the Empire. That seems realistic—I would be surprised if in a time like this, all the Christians were courageous enough to defy the government always. Julian’s speech is good. Very rousing. A few parts didn’t make sense.

“If we make decisions based on survival, and only on the abi…

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NEXT SECTION!!!

The next morning after breakfast, Julian and Leon began making their way along the streets looking for the homes of the three men they had left to lead the church: Konner Krüger, Reinhold Meier, and Fox Keller.…

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