Ruth

@rae Praying for you! 🙏🏻🩷

@esther-c

Okay that makes sense…I’ll keep reading and waiting for more and I’ll let you know if I come up with anything else!

I will be sure to remember that on the next cliffhanger.

@ellette-giselle

True, true. 😆

@hybridlore

Yes. I did.

Well, you could….. I’d just have to write it……

@ellette-giselle

Oh wow. So you wrote those two this morning?

Darn. This means I can’t ask for bonus chapters. 😢 XD

@hybridlore

I do two chapters each day and then post them. I may jump the gun today so that I have some fallback though.

@ellette-giselle

Wow. That’s a lot of drafts.

How far through this draft are you? Finished?

@hybridlore

This is draft number…… 7. I think.

I wrote this when I was 13 and have done rewrites almost every year since. This time I scrapped the draft and started over completely since I know the story inside and out. I feel like I can breathe again and it’s going much better.

@ellette-giselle

You didn’t like it before? Lol.

So how much of this have you written?

It’ll be interesting to see what happens with Viper.

He’s a tough guy who takes in a little kid. Plus, he doesn’t seem to want to be there any more than Jonathan does.

@hybridlore

Do you!!? I like him too. 😁

I’m so glad you like it. I’m actually also starting to like it as well.

Any thoughts about the new situation Jonathan is in? Also, out of curiosity, what makes you like Jim? (I like him, but i know his whole arc. I’m interested to see what you like. )

@linus-smallprint

Thank you so much for this! It was really helpful!

btw, Tintin is THE BEST. 😁

@ellette-giselle

I like Jim more and more…

Good chapters! I really like this book.

@linus-smallprint

Yay!!!

Thank so much for all the help you have given. I’m glad you’ve enjoyed it!! I shall take a look now.

@hybridlore     @koshka     @keilah-h       @elishavet-pidyon       @theducktator     @grcr   @whalekeeper

( @kyronthearcanin       @jonas      @power )

CHAPTER 7 and 8!!!!

I made a matching mask and cape, and the cape is amazingly red and flowy. I should wear it more but I need to fix the collar.

@loopylin

Thanks! You really should if you want to.

@ellette-giselle

😁 She’s my favorite character.

@jonas

Awesome, it worked!

@loopylin

Oh gracious. I want to read both of these so much. XD

Maybe the ink one. Maybe. But then, the cat…

Which are you most excited about?

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