Ruth

TO EVERYONE

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@keilah-h @highscribeofaetherium @hybridlore  @theducktator @whalekeeper  @rae

@hybridlore     @koshka     @keilah-h       @elishavet-pidyon       @theducktator     @grcr   @whalekeeper   @power

NEW CHAPTERS!!!!!!!!!!!!!

*sits back and smiles*

@rae

awesome!

Tag me when you do!

@rae

I know!! That quote is just AMAZING!!! I would love to see more of him!

Yes, it was a little bit flat in places, and maybe it could use some reworking, but honestly I think 1st person would spoil it. I liked all the scenes you had and the way you laid it out, even if it could use a teeny bit of work. That’s what I’m trying to say.…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Oh, thanks! I do have some people already signed up for feedback, but I won’t say no to more.

@theshadow

Access granted. There’s nothing there quite yet, but I’ll tag you when I get something posted.

@rae

Sorry! I just saw this.

Hmmm…. I don’t like first person naritives… so that already makes me biased, but I honestly really liked that chapter the way it is. Like, a LOT. I don’t want you to touch it. If it’s the chapter I’m thinking of (the end one) it was one of my very favorites.

You can try the first person, but I say leave…[Read more]

@the_lost-journal

😂😂😂 I wouldn’t edit like that. I can’t draw. XD Other reasons too of course. XD

@rae

I’m impressed that you managed that. I could maybe do eight hours, but not 12.

@theducktator

Oh no. Praying!!

My grandma was in a bad car accident today. It was a front collision at 50-60 mph, but other than that, we don’t really know anything about the crash itself. My grandma is in the emergency room with a fractured elbow and some broken ribs. She should recover without needing surgery, but prayers would be appreciated.

@rae

You’re not alone when it comes to getting easily distracted.

Should I write Farewell in first person?

Hmmm, can’t say. It seemed straightforward enough in third person from what I remember.

I finished all the short stories, but I didn’t give you feedback for all of them I’m afraid. 😅

@jonas

I’ll check it out (thanks @hybridlore for tagging).

@keilah-h

also they probably have joint ownership of like 5 brain cells lol

Lol, five might be a little generous XD

@ellette-giselle

Thank you! I’ll try posting on Thursdays.

@hybridlore

I’m good, thanks. Thank you for adding me!!

Also on the first person thing, it might work, but it also might throw everyone off, y’know? It really depends.

@rae

I think his passion is what made him the best fantasy author. If Tolkien didn’t love writing, and didn’t love the story, then it wouldn’t have been a classic. It wouldn’t have been published at all.

That’s exactly what I’m saying. He wrote great stories because he loved writing so much, not because his ability was somehow greater than other writers.

@rae

I’m one of those perfectionists who wants to throw their stuff in the trash everytime they read it just cuz it isn’t as good as Lord of the Rings

I know you’re joking, but has nobody thought about the fact that it must’ve either taken Tolkien like 5 drafts to get it perfect, or he was just the exception to the rule and had everything str…[Read more]