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hybridlore replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
Ellette!!!!
I feel like you’re going to kill at least one of them off. 🤨😣 Do I need to call out the Character Witness Protection??
You did another viewpoint shift without telling us. It probably needs a *** or something in there every time you switch from Leon to Julian.
The rest of the positions we divided up between the r…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
@freed_and_redeemed @hybridlore @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @linus-smallprint
NEXT SECTION!!!
Leon blew on his hands and rubbed them together. He stood up and went to his pack. Digging through it, he found his scarf. It was worn, and there were a few tears along the edge. He held it in both hands and though…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year, 3 months ago
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hybridlore replied to the topic KP GOOGLE MEET!!!!!!!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
Okay, great!!
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TheShadow replied to the topic KP GOOGLE MEET!!!!!!!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
Thank you!
I will probably be there, although I could only stay an hour because of something at 4:30.
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TheShadow replied to the topic The diamond game. in the forum Film 1 year, 3 months ago
We gotta get on this bro.
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Loopy replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
(Explanation: Mel didn’t end up at the maze entrance like everyone else because she got there using her own world’s magic, and wasn’t kidnapped by the maze’s magic. I don’t think the crystal orbs will work on her. Also, the door she came through is still there, and any character can use it, but it will just take them to an old lady’s backyard…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
Melissa Thompson
Mel’s great aunt Tina had several strange and interesting things in her backyard. She was what Melissa’s mom called a “hoarder”. She had always said it like it was a bad thing, but Mel liked that word. It made her think of dragons and piles of hidden treasures.
She stood before one of those treasures now. It was a tall wood…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
@theducktator I’m going to add a second character in a few minutes, so if you want, there’s someone Ayla can meet
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Loopy replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
Felicity
“…Planet?” Felicity’s mind spun as she tried to process everything she just heard. She had hoped finding out where Huntress was from would help figure out where they currently were. Instead she was just more confused.
She felt her frustration bubbling up again, and she pushed it back down, forcing herself to take a deep…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic KP GOOGLE MEET!!!!!!!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
Awesome!
Yay! If you could shoot me an email at hybridlore079@gmail.com then I will have yours.
Okay! Sorry you’re sick 😟
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hybridlore replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
It was a good section, but I don’t have much to add, sorry. 🙃
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
Huntress
“So, where are you from?” Felicity asked as the two of us navigated the maze.
The fog was getting lighter. I debated testing out my camouflage here, but didn’t want to startle my new traveling companion.
“I’m from the Systemic Republic.” I explained. “Specifically the planet Lygon in the outer edges of the system. I was b…[Read more]
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Enid replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 3 months ago
They didn’t use numbing after all. 😆
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
@loopylin Since I apparently didn’t post the whole long RP I typed up, I’m gonna redo it now.
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic KP GOOGLE MEET!!!!!!!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
I don’t have anything going on then, but I’m sick right now. Ideally I’m better by Saturday, but if I’m a wreck, I won’t be there.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
@ellette-giselle ohh okay.
Maybe change it to say “heavy fines” so that it’s clear this is a weighty sentence.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
large fines could leave a family destitute and starving. Public retribution could be anything, including baring them from work or places of business or physical punishment.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
For sheltering and fraternizing with these men, the punishment is fines and public retribution.
Seems a little….light of a punishment for dealing with what they believe are religious heretics.
But who am I to know that, you’ve probably done a ton more research.
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