Ruth

Anyone is welcome to question this character, I need to flesh him out more, since he’s new

He won’t admit it, but he has a secret identity as a figure called the Protector, so if you want to pry into the side of him instead of his average citizen act, feel free! For now, he’ll reply as his citizen self.

Quick description: Gabriel is tall, but I…[Read more]

@the_lost-journal

 I wish I could draw like that

That drawing is 15 years of practice being put into one piece of art. I’ve been drawing since I could first hold a crayon (our poor walls lol). You’ll get there 🙂

I imagine that alone took FOREVER!!!!

It took 7+ hours for the entire drawing, not sure how long it was for the background alone.

Can I…

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That ended up bigger than I expected…

New character design

The character’s name is Gabriel Mai.

I never know what to rp

@loopylin

Chase

Chase’s eyes wandered to the puppy. Such a little thing. He’s almost smaller than the wolf pups. Chase looked up at Felicity, actually meeting her eyes, his own eyes remaining green. “W-want t-to go?” He pointed out the window at the puppy.

Nice to see I won’t be alone 🙂

@dekreel

Thx.

The backstory behind it is pretty crazy.

@loopylin

Also I just had an idea. What if, as Chase got closer to certain people, he started associating them in his mind with different animals depending on their personality? Could be a way he gets more comfortable around some people. Just an idea though. You can use if you want or not.

That is an awesome idea! And it sounds just like something…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

I’m game 🙂

@loopylin

Sorry that I haven’t been active. I wasn’t sure what to rp, and there was alot of life stuff I was working with.

Chase

Chase shook his head. “Wha-what t-teach-er g-gives t-tree l-less-ons?” Besides, if you want to climb trees, you can talk to squirrels about it. They can tell you all kind of things about the different kind of trees…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Thanks

@loopylin

Chase

Chase didn’t know what to think of the chaotic sight, so he stared with blank, black eyes, face half cast in shadow by his hoodie. “Why T-teach-er in t-tree?” A single flicker of purple came to Chase’s eyes, then died again.

@loopylin

Yeah, sorry.

Um, Chase would prefer puppy.

I’ll write a quick rp for him to get things moving along

He wasn’t as fearsome as she had pictured after the fight the previous night. Instead he seemed kind and gentle, more so than most other people she had met.

It’s funny to think of Chase as fearsome, he’s just so…not u…[Read more]

@loopylin

Nar: “Of course. You can never spend any amount of time in my profession without finding someone you couldn’t help.”

Wordy writing styles.

As Andrew can testify, more than once I have criticized books for wordy writing styles.

I’m not saying writers should state things as brief as possible, but writers shouldn’t take a paragraph and fill it with needless words. It bogs down the reader. There’s a balance between adding needless words and being too brief.