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@freedomwriter76

Yes, it would help to have the reference pics… I’ve never actually drawn this type of person before. Thanks!

Oh and it could be a week before I have the drawing cuz I’m not the type to sit down and start and finish a drawing all in one day, I take my time and frequently like to return with new eyes to look at it.

@savannah_garce2009

All I have to say is it’s good and I want you to read the article below, especially number 2.

https://storyembers.org/5-stylistic-choices-you-need-to-stop-making/

This is okay a little bit and in some places (for instance I think it was well-used in the scene where Lilitu was telling Sef his dream) but eventually, and in…[Read more]

So we’re going with second idea, just the Queen uses the magical house all our characters are locked inside to get to Lillen?

@loopylin

Now the question is, at what point do like Nahim that if he died, would you feel any emotion for him?

And I hope you don’t mind this question, but do have a hard time separating the words Alin and Akin? Do they look exactly the same to you?

Thanks for suggestions! I love suggestions, they always teach me something. 😃.

Do you think…[Read more]

@power

Believe it or not, every one of your posts make me laugh. It would be interesting to meet you in person one day, that conversation could go really good or really bad fast.

I apprieciate your comment very much. I shall be changing that. In fact, I’ve been doing a re-work of chapter one and shall post it here when I’m done.

Oops, sorry. That’s

@freedomwriter76

I’m open!

@freedom

I’m open.

@savannah_grace2009

The new RP idea:

There once was a great king who had a deep thirst for knowledge. It was such a deep thirst that it is said he never felt like he had ever gathered enough and spent his time mostly in the library of the Palace. It was because of this that the king, spurred by the words of his greatest advisor, sent out an edict…

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By the way, I’ve retired Nahim from this RP, it’s not going anywhere with him.

When you’ve got WAY too many characters and stories but not enough time…

(Note: I didn’t draw this)

@savannah_grace2009

Thanks, I’ll be brainstorming. Do you mind if it’s medieval themed? Cuz I’ve got a bright idea for that one.

@mineralizedwritings

Me like it! The armor and clothing is PERFECT. The face is a little unclear, but yeah, WAY to often I’ve ruined a picture trying to “make it better”. XD

@anyone

What would you guys like to see me draw? You’ve seen ONE drawing and my style is realistic (mostly), and I will take offers to draw someone else’s character if…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

So I read your epilogue and a few things stuck out to me…

(ordered by relevance)

1. I love it.

2. In the first part I almost think you use the Name ‘Great One’ a little to much.

3. While Rishona may grow angry, I doubt in such a perfect world she would try to slap someone with no respect. If Elysium is perfect, and the…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Explain what a RP is to me and I’ll do it. I really need to jog my brain!

@savannah_grace2009

Thanks, but I feel like it’s to, to…undescriptive? I don’t know. It just doesn’t seem Nahim. It seems wrong, somehow.

Honestly, the style seems like I didn’t even write it.

@savannah_grace2009 @hybridlore @esther-c @whoever-else

There is something really wrong with this scene. I can’t figure it out at all. Help!

“I told you not to go anywhere.” Mandin was half-laughing.

Nahim turned around suddenly, forgetting his helmet rested in the flowers beside him. Mandin froze, a look of shock in his features.

“What is th…

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@aranel

Wait…I just saw you like purple and blue…Purple is my fAVORITE COLOR! Ever since I can remember.

I adore cats too, but horses steal my heart. I own seven cats at the moment.

I like to write fantasy and sci-fi. A historical fiction one day, but not yet. My WIP is sci-fi.

Pe-CONS

Am I the only one in the world who pronounces it…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

I shall begin reading, but I can’t promise I’ll have tons of time to read all of it now. Thanks for the link!

P. S.

Don’t worry about the number of chapters, I myself have only gotten to about ten on my current draft!