Ruth

@jonas

yes, you are correct

What is it with me and typos this week?…

Koshtin

“Fetch her! And you will not, I can.”

I didn’t want to make a topic for this, but wanted to write it anyways…

The sound of drums seemed to shake the very foundation of the vacation house. Nae looked innocently up the set of winding stairs that led to Jr’s room with her large, childish eyes.

“Da, why is Junior trying to bring the house down with his drums?” Nahim gathered up his…

[Read more]

Okay, here is the current headache of the year…

Nahum-Alpha Slit Silvanus Thurston Dare Krogen Fives Grath

Warning, the arrangement may change later and I might add another name!

Now I shall disect his name! Each part has a meaning to his parents (he was their first child, so he got loaded on with meaning)

Nahum-from his father’s adoptive f…[Read more]

Not really a storyline, more like just points.

• Brandt saves Brenna, a slave/his Sweetheart
• Brandt’s leaders and fellows
• Brandt’s mission that he fails, falls and breaks his leg. Wounded.
• Elderly man takes him in, caring for him, not afraid to share beliefs.
• Brandt returns to fellows, overcome with guilt, pain, sorrow, depression,…

[Read more]

@highscribeofaetherium ↑↑↑

It’s as a Vow, and It’s as a Rule

A little child’s first cry,

It’s little voice piercing the sky.

It’s as a vow and it’s as a rule,

That life should spring forth fresh and new.

A little toddler with feet so small,

Pads down the grass that is so tall.

It’s as a vow, and it’s as a rule,

That life should be given to you.

&nbsp…[Read more]

@jonas

“A hero is the one who bleeds, red drops that fall like planter’s seeds.”

@highscribeofaetherium

Koshtin

Koshtin’s crooked smile faided on his lips. His eyes went pale as death, his hands had a black vapor. The black vapor became like a ring around her neck. She felt something choking her, but it couldn’t be pulled away, for her fingers passed through it, yet it still held her. Her feet floated six inches above the…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @savannah_grace2009

The biggest thing I noticed for critiquing was that it was kinda confusing with all the characters who was doing what. I got lost on who the soldiers were and who the slaves were in the first few paragraphs and kinda got lost on what everyone was doing whilst reading.

Yeah, I was a little worried about…[Read more]

Glace

The eyes look weird cuz I had to paste the irises in and I’ve never done that before…Any tips on how to do that better?

@esther-c

Chase Duke

Chase hung back as Fynn greeted a blue girl, her horse ad what guessed to be his really really close friend. I don’t belong here. He quickly pulled his hood over his face again, hoping the two girls and odd horse wouldn’t notice him. He slouched against the wall, watching as the four talked.

The horse interested him the mo…[Read more]

@thearcaneaxion

Thanks for the reply

@freedomwriter76

I like your forum signature.

@everyone

Robert Robinson

6’2″. Brown hair with blond highlights, tanned skin, blue eyes.

Used to be MC of the Solomon Team but I got rid of that book, it actually was a historical fiction, not a sci-fi or fantasy.

Robert was born July 28th, 1975 to Richard and Rachel Robinson. When he was six, h…[Read more]

@highscribeofaetherium

Koshtin

“How can I trust you? You have given me no reason to believe that you would be telling the truth. Aside from the fact that you want us to murder these Lillenings, which honestly gives me even less reason to trust you.”

Koshtin smiled at her his twisted smile.

“My rebel lady, which of the twelve planets are you…[Read more]

@esther-c

btw, Fynn and Lukas are friends, not brothers.

Oops.

(I think after a couple more RPs, I’m gonna have Fynn find Callista who’s with Sara’s Livia. If you’re good with that.)

Yeah, that’s fine.

Chase Duke

Aletheia? Where on Adalland (this name will most likely change later) is there a city called Aletheia? Chase was never good at geogr…[Read more]