Ruth

@calyhuge

Idk, she sounds pretty great, but I’d have to see her in rp to know if Chase would like her. Would you mind doing a Wing it to Win it with her and rp?

@whalekeeper

Nar

Nar adjusted the satchel hanging from her shoulder to rest on the opposite hip. The blonde at the desk said they had no rules about students carrying medical supplies, but she never saw the stuuf Nar kept for when Junior wasn’t letting her work…Nar was pretty sure knockout pills would be banned.

She smiled as she entered the…[Read more]

@jonas

When a slyiad shifts, you can tell by like one or two things that they aren’t what they seem. Eight eyes is an example. In her teacher form, she has some orange spots on her arms, that she hides.

@calyhuge

I don’t think getting Fennin’s feet wet would deflect lightning into the ground, that is, I believe, scientifically impossible. Also, are you aware that just lightning hitting next to Fennin would cause serious burns? Is this some kind of magical lightning that isn’t real lightning? Also, Fennin is wearing boots, how is he supposed to…[Read more]

@jonas

Jeptune? 🙄 I have no idea where she is rn. Jeptune is an odd slyiad, sometimes she acts insane, other times like a strict school teacher (she actually is Chase Duke’s school teacher, and since slyiads are the natural rivals of shyiads, things go very badly for Chase since he can’t control his powers yet.) Actually, rn she could be anything…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

I know a girl I could add at last resort for him…her name is Narray Nayhelm, but everyone calls her Nar. Afraid of nothing, (especially blood) and also really nice with sometimes a motherly quality with her patients. She’s a doctor, but at the age I would add her to the RP (age fifteen) she’d be considered by the Realn an…[Read more]

@jonas

Okay, sorry, now I get it.

Burning tears in silence fall
Mingling with the shattered glass.
Still I watch the moonlight pale
As shadows flicker, while He walks past
Idt that’s any better either, but it’s all I really can think of. Your style is very different from mine, but I like it a lot 🙂

With skillful fingers, it is He who selects
A piece of glass now darkly stained
And edged in silver carefully sets
It in my empty window frame.

Idk if that’s any better.

Shard by shard He slowly builds
Varied hues where once was clear,
Shaped and cut – my window fills
From brokenness to beauty.

@koshka

I dabble a little in poetry and honestly have no talent for it, but my favourite verses are the two last. Why? Because it feels right somehow. I would help you out more, but I’m afraid I don’t reckonize your style well. I apologize for how little help I can offer.

Problem is, before the dance, I need to find him a date. Either someone super nice or someone who can relate to him like no other…someone who’s super nice would be better, since he really needs a pick-me-up most the time.

Ugh! I gel like someone who sets their brother or son up with a blind date!

Chase Duke

Chase dropped his head into his folded arms, waiting for the dance lessons to begin. At this point he wanted it over and done with.

I imagine Chase as a good dancer since he is actually very aware of how his body moves. He also has a gentlemanly undertone if you can pierce the blackness.

@scoutfinch180

Oh dear…I think I have failed as a writer.

It’s currently around twenty two o’clock for me, so I can’t fully reply rn (and dont have much energy or will either) but I will say that a few of your edits are mistaken…and it’s totally my fault!

I can’t believe I really liked this chapter!

Wait, @calyhuge where are your charries who were being attacked by the mormaka?

Angere

Angere looked into Rigere’s face. He knew what she was going to do.

“You want to kill the Lost Child? The Realn who calls for his mother?” Rigere nodded, her evil icy eyes thinning to slits.

“He will die before anyone else. I don’t care. And if you kill the lady Realn…” Angere grinned to himself.

“Every Warrior hates seeing a pretty…[Read more]

Sorry, that’s @calyhuge

@cslyhuge

Yes, but he is built like Nahim.