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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
@whalekeeper @loopylin
Chase
Chase reached into his pocket and silently pulled out his phone that he had grabbed from the floor before the three of them left the scene. He held it where the girl could see it, before sliding it back into his pocket.
“We, we need to…” He pointed to the doorway. “T-teachers, sta, stew, stu-dents find us.”
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Ruth replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
@everyone
Thanks for answering my questions, it meant a lot.
And yes, it is a violin.
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Ruth replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
Yessssss, very much so! I really loved the body language and it really conveyed Nahim’s feelings/emotions/fears for sure!
Good. I was worried it was kinda unclear.
A Violinnnnnnnnn (and I was over here excited, like: HEYYY, RIKER PLAYS VIOLIN!! XD)
No way! That’s amazing! Idk even how to react, that’s just SO GREAT! And I’m o…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
Yep, makes sense. One thing that threw me out a little was how Nahim stuttered a bit, and his shivery response. I haven’t seen much of this character but for some reason I picture him as the stoic, silent warrior type. The stuttering especially sounds like a younger man or boy – the type like in Way of Kings, with the boy who was dra…
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Ruth replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
@highscribeofaetherium @freed_and_redeemed @jonas @whalekeeper @loopylin @keilah-h @theducktator @whoever-cares
Hey,I need help knowing if this scene feels forced or anything.
The context is that Mandin invited Nahim to a festival that Mandin’s family was having, and Nahim promised to finally tell Mandin his traumatic backstory.
Evening came,…
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Ruth posted an update 2 years, 1 month ago
Every time you smile, a flower blooms somewhere around the world at the same time.
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Ruth replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
Yeah, I had to do this same thing last month… Poor Nahim was totally broken…
Anyways, what I personally did was not focus much on the physical, but went more for the thoughts and emotions of my MC. It was still awful, but not in a gruesome way.
I did mention the body language a couple times of the one being tortured, but…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Fairytale AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
Yes, I’ve been thinking about that for the past couple months. For whatever reason, skinwalkers ad hydras have been popping into my head every time I think about it…
I’ll begin brainstorming but for now let us set up our characters. Idk, maybe we make up someone who can get captured by a dragon and everyone goes to save them 🤷🏻♀️…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Fairytale AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
Silvanis
“Of course you’re a dragon! I’m not stupid, despite popular opinion. And no, no other dragons-” Silvanis stopped, looking around. “Well, minus the one outside. He doesn’t appear to have a rifle, but my vision can kinda get blurry through walls so don’t trust me. Can’t tell his color but doesn’t appear to have a feminine build.…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
Well, we have some bad teachers and haven’t yet met the good ones. Sounds like an average school to me.
It’d take an exceptional teacher to change Chase’s mind about school. I mean, if your school teacher was either a man you were always afraid of or a woman who literally tried to kill you, how would you…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Fairytale AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
Wyoh! I hate you!
Huh, that’s interesting cuz I’ve never seen more of Tron than a ten-second clip in which most my attention was on the motorcycle things.
I’m planning on redoing the Silvanis drawing now cuz I see it from my bed where I set it and his ear, his cheek, and his neck scream at me every time I look at him.
I also need to…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
Trying again
Chase
“Hey, calm down, kid. Just trying to help you up.”
Chase tried to say he was sorry but all that would come out were weak vocalizations that made no sense. He acted like a scared rabbit, his breathing fast and shallow, his eyes darting, and his body shaking.
Friend or foe? Who is this?Â
Heavy…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
Chase
Chase hadn’t realized until now that his breathing was unnatural. He stared straight into the one eye of the person who had caught him and opened his mouth to speak. Nothing came out. He tried again. He couldn’t make any words form, only weak vocalizations. Giving up, he allowed his eyes to flash neon yellow like…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
Chase
Chase cowered, hugging himself as he made his way through a small crowd of both students and teachers. Guessing by everyone’s height, he supposed Sef could be in this group. They looked the same age, and they all were mostly quieter kids waiting for the power to come back on. Chase stopped to listen for the voices of a couple students…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
Who owns the Math teacher? Cuz I was wondering if it would be interesting if she came across Chase. Since @savannah_grace2009 is not really active rn, I can’t really have him actually find Sef like he wanted, but I can’t think of something else for him to do.
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Ruth replied to the topic Fairytale AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
It looks worse than I remember but I’ll share it anyway….
@keilah-h @anyone
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Ruth replied to the topic Fairytale AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
oh, and when you add Silvanis, you can probably add him in the same general area if you want him and Jaylen to meet.)
Okay. I’ll probably rp him tomorrow after I post a pic of him. It’s a pretty bad watercolor, but it’ll give you an idea of how he looks in this rp
I also just realized that how I imagine his fangs look like vampire’s.…
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Ruth replied to the topic Fairytale AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
She has the mind of six-year-old me, minus the purple dragons XD
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Ruth replied to the topic Fairytale AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
Ilsa
Hunter clawed something into the ground. With little droplets springing up from the ground under my feet, I danced to where I could see what he had done. Two words. Words in a language I didn’t understand. What fun! Neither of us understand what we write! I don’t think this has happened exactly like this before… No, it never…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Fairytale AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
Oh no, Mayflies! The little annoying bugs that plague New England! As someone who lives in the country (or what CT calls country, far cry from Upstate New York) with a stream, a soggy swamp-like pond and a pond with some goldfish that my cat likes to hunt, I really no not appreciate the creatures. They’re like little flying black…[Read more]
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I love that.
Me too.