PrincesaChronicle22

@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76 @lightoverdarkness6 @gwyndalf-the-wise @princesachronicle22

Anyone up for a chat while I do some writing?

@princesachronicle22 it is 😊

@loopylin @mineralizedwritings @princesachronicle22 It’s late, but hopefully this’ll keep the story going.

Allen

“I’m fine.” Serin growled when Dante asked if she was okay. “Just lost a little blood.”

“That doesn’t look fine.” Allen gestured to the wound from the beast. “I don’t know about here, but in my world, there are many venomous…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Ahh, I have not!!! 😭😮😔 So sorry about that!!! Will/Ev were going to find a frozen dragon or something…right??? 😅

Naw, you’re good. 😊

Sure! Lol XD Whatever you want do. 😁

@godlyfantasy12 @loopylin @lightoverdarkness6 @princesachronicle22 @thearcaneaxiom @elishavet-pidyon @anyone-else-I-missed

Is there any group for Destry, Fyn…[Read more]

@kyronthearcanin

Here’s my proper response. Nice to meet you Ava! I’m TheArcaneAxiom. I’m a homeschooled writer about to leave highschool! XD I love math and fundamental divine truth, and discussing that through writing. I’m a sci-fi/fantasy writer as well, and I promise that you will see a lot more of that here! My current WIP is actually a…[Read more]

@princesachronicle22

Oh, cool!

@esther-c

Oooo I really like that scene! =D
However I don’t have any feedback/suggestions for you right now, sorry.

@princesachronicle22

AH I MUST READ MORE XD
What creature is Anwyn?
sorry I don’t have feedback/suggestions for you either

@princesachronicle22

Yeah, I’ve considered a few options like that, but my main problem is, that this has already happened in the book. Simply a side characters view point of the scenario. She is assumed to be in leauge with the villains, but this is how I’m showing that she wasn’t at all.

So it was hard for me to state it as a full flash…

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@princesachronicle22

That was really cool to read! Are you going to post more? I’m curious to see what the rock thing is. Also, Anwyn giving everyone nicknames was hilarious.

@princesachronicle22

Anwyn cringed, knowing that it was the sound of the strange foot coverings these savages chose to wear.

*gasp* Oh my word, is she talking about shoes?? That’s awesome!! XD I felt confused like she was at our human world, but in a good way. I could really see the world through her eyes, so great job!! 😄

As for the t…[Read more]

@princesachronicle22

Wow!!!! That’s SOOO good girl!! I love the detail and how clear it is. 😍😍😍😍

I have that problem too, like smoothly transitioning scenes, especially for memories and flashbacks.

Hmm…well, you could connect the next scene with maybe Anwyn like wincing at the memory, or some kind of reaction.

Or maybe Vermilion could say…[Read more]

@princesachronicle22 that was great, though I’m not entirely sure how to help you… XD

Poor Anwyn 😭

I will say one thing…I was definitely confused with the whole Rock and light thing (like I know we’re supposed to be confused but I mean I couldn’t exactly “see” what was happening if that makes sense 😊) so yea

@princesachronicle22

The first part was good! I don’t really read stuff that goes into that much detail about peoples torment XD So I stopped reading, but I’m sure it was great. Love your writing style btw!

@princesachronicle22

Thanks!!

@princesachronicle22 AWW SERIN 😭 honestly she makes me think of Paxton except because of the abuse he went through he became scared, shy, etc. Serin has become tough, cold, etc.

But Pax has been thru a lot too. He actually broke an arm once because…well…

Yea…

He was blamed for it though… “clumsiness”

@princesachronicle22

Ah! Serin! No! Her father seems terrible. 😡 You should add him to the castle so I can have one of my charries beat him up.

@princesachronicle22 AWWW JUST READ IT I LUV HIM SO MUCH!!! @thearcaneaxiom I’d love to have Corvina join that group btw!

@princesachronicle22 OH I must’ve missed it sorry!!!