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Active 6 months ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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freedom posted an update 2 years, 3 months ago
Riker will be fineeeeeeeeeeeeee. Eventually
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 3 months ago
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 3 months ago
This one’s for you.
@anyone-else I know this scene isn’t my best, but I’m super tired and brain-dead…and I just felt like writing something XD
Chapter 15
Sef held Hanna tight to her chest.
Please be quiet, she silently pleaded, rocking back and forth.
A waft of the rancid odor escaped through the secret door overhead, and Sef…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 3 months ago
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TheShadow replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 3 months ago
Thanks for reading it!!!!!!! <3
Your welcome! 🙂
Idk if I’d call it a resistance, but all I can say is that light always prevails over darkness!!!!!!!!!
Ooh, can’t wait to see what happens!
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TheShadow replied to the topic Wholesome Exclamations in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
Yessss!!!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 3 months ago
Thanks for reading it!!!!!!! <3
Idk if I’d call it a resistance, but all I can say is that light always prevails over darkness!!!!!!!!!
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TheShadow replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 3 months ago
Hi!! Sorry I haven’t responded for a while. I’m all caught up with your book, and so far, I think it’s really good! Lilitu and Sef’s struggle feels pretty realistic, although sometimes I get a little annoyed at the Pythonos sincwe they’re so ruthless. That’s good though, because it gets across that they’re evil and evil can…[Read more]
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TheShadow replied to the topic The Quote Archive in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
Okay, I’ll try my best!
Huntress – not 100% sure with this one, but my best guess is trying to kill a target that someone else failed to
Scout – being his own cocky self while fighting someone (and of course trying to show off XD)
Engineer – his team may have just come from a defeat, and he would probably be disappointed if his guns…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 3 months ago
@highscribeofatherium
hahaha you’re good!!!
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HighScribe replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 3 months ago
@savannah_grace2009
Oh…*looks back*
Nah, it’s fine, I’m just blind, apparently. -
SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 years, 3 months ago
@highscribeofaetherium @esther-c
Thanks guys <333
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 3 months ago
He didn’t get it sloshed over him–it was much worse and more painful, I’m afraid.
he tried to eat it when it was wayyyyyyyyyy too hot XD XD
should I make this clearer?
At first I didn’t like Eloy either…but I felt bad for him so now I do XD
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 3 months ago
My fantasy isn’t a typical fantasy.
It’s combining medieval times with our modern world. So there are cars like we have, and pistols, and other things you’ll see later.
The rules for my world are…there are no rules.
I’m not even sure if this works or not (the author I’m getting feedback from said that they can be combined…[Read more]
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HighScribe replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 3 months ago
How do you know this?😂
😐
It may have happened once or twice…
Poor guy’s family keeps forgetting he exists. Maybe he’d be in a better mood if people actually cared about him.
He seems like the kind of guy who’d be a grump anyway.
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Esther replied to the topic Ultimate KP Novel in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
Thanks for reminding me! I’ll have it out this week!
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Esther replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 years, 3 months ago
@grcr @keilah-h @savannah_grace2009
Praying for all of you ladies!! ❤️
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HighScribe replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 years, 3 months ago
I’ll be praying for you <3
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HighScribe replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 3 months ago
WHAAAAT? He’s doing it ON PURPOSE? Bad Cassian! I thought you were nice!
I still don’t like Eloy, he’s a grump.
Poor Lilitu, though XD getting hot soup sloshed over you is no fun.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 3 months ago
hahahaha lol
And will go through more, since she’s the main character.
YOU HAVE NO IDEA 😬😬😬
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@rae @savannah_grace2009 Y’all don’t come after me, but Riker may soon be dealing with more than just an infection in his arm in Broken Shackles since he’s now on the run😬
I NEED RIKER UPDATES!!!!!
Also, Riker, I finished my 1973 First Aid and Personal Safety book from the American Red Cross and have a copy of the 29th American edition of Gray’s Anatomy (not the TV show, the book of anatomy) on my shelf, plus I have saved articles about injuries, so you better believe I’m going to tell you you ARE NOT OKAY and…[Read more]
Has anybody actually tried to read the Gray’s Anatomy book? I tried reading a chapter on lymph which I’ve always Ben fascinated with, but had to stop not even a page in because I needed a mental break! Sheesh, Gray didn’t leave anything out,vdid he?
Been not Ben. autocorrect.
Interesting! I haven’t read that.
also, you’ll have to wait on Riker updates. I’m writing a scene now👀👀👀
@freed_and_redeemed
WHY WOULD YOU DO THIS TO ME
Shhhhhhhhhhh. He’ll be fineeeeeeeee
He’s going to LOSE AN ARM!!!
Geez, Whaley😂😂 Who do you think I am??? XD
Ummmmm idk an SURGEON WITH A KNIFE
😂😂😂😂 you good, Whaley?? I’m a little concerned😂
Oh no! Riker, don’t be stupid! Go to the hospital or something!
Idk if he’ll listen to you😬🫣
I want to smack some sense into him, but I’m concerned that would worsen the problem.
@theducktator Unarguably so 😂