PrincesaChronicle22

Thanks for the prayers everybody! 🤗

They held the funeral today. I wasn’t there for the whole thing but it was good to get in contact with his oldest daughter (the one I know the best). Just please continue praying for them. Grief is a journey and the sadness never really fully goes away. There’s a joy in knowing he’s with the Lord, but know…[Read more]

Some extra explanation in case that rp didn’t make sense: Benny is essentially a living drawing made of enchanted ink. He is entirely 2 dimensional and can travel anywhere across mostly flat surfaces. He can grow and shrink in size. He can’t talk or make noise, but he’s very expressive so people can typically understand him anyway. Except Fel.…[Read more]

@jonas Cool ok @whalekeeper @ellette-giselle @raxforge @hybridlore @rae @grcr

Felicity

As Felicity listened to the stranger, some odd movement in the corner of her eye caught her attention.

A couple feet away from her stood a brick chimney. Drawn in dark ink on its wall, a two-dimensional cartoon rabbit was waving at her. He wore a pair of…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

That’s great, congratulations to your sister!! That’s really awesome, thank you for telling us. I’ll make sure to get it asap.

@whalekeeper Yesss that book is the best. It’s designed so you can learn it by yourself without a teacher. I should probably pick it up again even though I’m not in school.

@jonas

I was thinking of adding two more characters and sending Felicity on a short rescue mission for one of them, but I’ve been delaying it. If I do that now, would that completely derail your plans? I can figure out a different way to introduce them if you’d rather

@rae @esther-c

I really miss this RP…is it still going??? And is there any way that I can bring Sef and Liv back…? 👀👀👀

@trailblazer

That is so cool!!!! That sounds amazing!!!!!

@loopylin

Thank you so much <333

Yesssss! I ate too much food lol

@jonas

Oh okay!

That’s not the reason anymore I guess 😂 I actually forgot I said that…a lot has changed lol

That makes sense though, I understand what you’re saying!

Oh, and as for why I changed the ending instead of them abandoning Lilitu…

There are a couple reasons why I did that. Maybe they’re not good reasons lol but I’m going to leave it, at least for now so I can play with it. I think it will make the story make a little bit more sense  in the future so I’m just going to leave it for now.

@hybridlore

Thank youuu!

@highscribe

I think this is really good! You have some really nice prose.

Thank you so much!

I corrected the things you suggested and you’re right, I think it will flow a lot better! Thank you so much, you have been very helpful! <3

@jonas

I think I asked before why he insisted on this, and you said that it was to sweeten the deal for Kaden. Personally, I feel like you should show Kaden as having more hesitation if this is going to work. To me, it seems like they have already made up their minds to become Pythonos. Sure, they’re scared, but to me, it still doesn’t convey a s…

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@jonas @highscribeofaetherium

Oh my goodness you guys are so good!!!!

I actually have noticed a couple of the things you’ve said before but for some reason I forgot to change them… *facepalm* I’ll go fix them now before I forget again lol!

@savannah_grace2009

I think this is really good! You have some really nice prose.

The sensation made her want to scream, cry out in agony…

You don’t really need an ellipsis here. A period would work better.

“It’s those cursed Paynes,” Odessa muttered, anger flashing in her violet eyes.

This makes it sound like Kaden and Sevryn have tried to get…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Thanks so much, I’m glad you liked it!!

@power

Congratulations, your story was amazing!!! Everything was so well put together!!

@liberty

Thank you, your story was really good too!

Dang, I miss taking Latin now

@whalekeeper

Just curious, what curriculum are you taking? Do you use the Familia Romana book?

@savannah_grace2009

I’m sorry you’re going through that. I’ll be praying for her and your family ❤️

Glad to hear that you had a good holiday despite it though

@whalekeeper Oh yeah I forgot about that! I haven’t listened to it

@whalekeeper

I’m a bit rusty, but the first line, since breaths is plural, should be “Spiritūs sunt videre difficilis”

I’m not sure about the second line because the vocabulary is unfamiliar, but it seems off. Just make sure the verb is in the imperative case. I can’t tell if it is or not.

Also, I think “ramos” needs to be “ramōs”.

Real…[Read more]