@princesachronicle22
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Loopy replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
Here’s what I wrote if anyone wants to see:
In the late morning of one wet April day, the rain had cleared enough that Brea Thorne, age six, could go for a walk with her nanny. And she was beyond ready for it. She jumped and skipped along, looping back every once in a while to her slower paced guardian.
It was about fifteen minutes into t…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
@hybridlore Thanks XD  I needed the motivation. I got a part of a scene that’s been stuck in my head out finally.
If I had any other older snowballs, I’m just going to forget about them lol
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Esther replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
*gasp* It’s a date!
Yes!! 🤭 In my first draft I actually never wrote a scene of their first study sesh together…do you think I should add that in for the second draft??
When what, Tyler? 👀 I want to know…
I would like to know as well… 🤣
Definitely left that open for the imagination or a future short story ὄ…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
Ok, so I told you I’d finish reading your book by the end of February, and I did! But I only started like two days ago. 🤣 Here are my thoughts! (Excuse any typos, I was doing this in the car, lol!)
Ok, so the biggest thing I noticed was the lack of hope throughout the story. The characters seemed to think about death a lot…[Read more]
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TheShadow replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
Okay! I could always try to integrate that into scenes while they’re traveling (to the church meetings, to their jobs).
That sounds good.
Gotcha. I’ll try to add some more of that in.
Cool, I’ll look out for it.
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Loopy replied to the topic Character Name Help in the forum Characters 1 year, 2 months ago
Also Brian, Kevin, Julie, Terry
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Loopy replied to the topic Character Name Help in the forum Characters 1 year, 2 months ago
@theducktator Found these when I looked up popular gen X namesÂ

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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
OH, and I’m also in the process of reformatting/reediting Freedom’s Fire to fix what a scam company ruined and where things needed to be edited just a tiny bit, so y’all can also look forward to a revised edition of Freedom’s Fire hopefully before too long🤭
OH, and Pinterest board for Book #3 so y’all can begin to get a feel for what the story…[Read more]
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 hehe I’m glad you’re excited🤭 @ellette-giselle @rae @keilah-h @theducktator @grcr @highscribeofaetherium @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @anyone-else-idk-lol-?
Soooo I just wanted to say that me having this fantasy idea doesn’t really change anything about the Broken and Redeemed Trilogy. Though I love this new idea, Leon/Riker…[Read more]
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HighScribe replied to the topic Character commissions!! in the forum Art 1 year, 2 months ago
I’m sorry, I finished drawing Rory a couple days ago but I realized I never took a photo and posted it!
Here he is (I think something’s off about his face 🤔 but I hope it looks like him)

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HighScribe replied to the topic KP GOOGLE MEET!!!!!!!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
@ellette-giselle @hybridlore @anyone
I don’t know if I’ll have anything going on that day (probably not, though) but if I’m free I’ll come!
Ellette, I think I gave you my email, right?
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HighScribe replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
😱😱😱
Well, when I’m done doing all the snowballs I’ve accumulated I’ll have 44 to throw so I will have ample revenge.
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
@koshka @ellette-giselle I’m loving all the wholesome Leo and Rory moments 🩷
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
@whalekeeper hehe
writing rps where my characters are ticked off is always super fun, but then I feel instantly embarrassed after I post them.
Dante has officially been added to Alpha’s possible threat list….
lol there goes Dante’s free rent. At least he’s not underestimating him anymore.
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Esther replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 2 months ago
Haha, so true though 😂😂
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Esther replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 2 months ago
Ahh, I gotcha. Well I’m glad he’s doing well!!
I have yet to ask him what he thinks about all this… My brother is the kind of guy who shrugs and asks if he can have ice cream for every meal at the hospital. 😂😭 I remember as a little kid, I wanted to have a surgery so I could have extra treats.
I get that, my brother would proba…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Denomination Q and A in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 2 months ago
hm, my church is definitely not corrupted! All the people there truly care and want to give people a god church experience to make them care about church. And we do try to get people into the church, but that is us just following the mission of Jesus and being fishers of men! Like most churches just stay in their own community…
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Esther replied to the topic Denomination Q and A in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 2 months ago
No worries! : )
Yeah, definitely. We follow the exact liturgy every week, with hymns interspersed, and a reading from the OT, the Psalms, an Epistle, and a Gospel, and Communion.
Ok cool! So you do Communion every week?
I usually wear a dress or skirt, as do many of the women. Pretty much everyone in our church dresses up, except…
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Esther replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 2 months ago
Praise the Lord! That’s awesome to hear!!
Is he in pain because of it?? Or is he doing okay?
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Esther replied to the topic KP GOOGLE MEET!!!!!!!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
I might be able to make it! 🤞 We’ll see—I have some stuff to do that day
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