PrincesaChronicle22

@keilah-h

obviously they’d have like separate rooms, but I think each couple has a cabin to their own. I imagine each person’s room has stuff they enjoy in it—for example, Sniper’s probably has a place he can store his rifle and knife, a large window to the outside (he seems like the kind of person to enjoy that), and some things he’d find fami…

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@keilah-h @rae @theducktator @kyronthearcanin@princesachronicles22

Trevor

Trevor hid a smile while watching Fairy and Silvanus. Next to him, Azalea tapped him on the shoulder and he glanced over. “What’s up?”

“It’s getting late, we should head back to the cabins.”

Trevor nodded, standing up with her. “Azalea and I are going to sleep now, go…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Ooh, yay you’re picking this up again!! Here’s my character if you could draw her please:

Name: Elina Miller

Age: 16

Gender: female

Clothing: jeans, basic blue sneakers, blue T-shirt, a light green jacket, and a baseball cap.

Time period (Or the time period the fashion replicates): about today

Physical appearance: about 5’5…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Going to catch up soon, but I noticed you used the word “glanced” a few times in one chapter (can’t remember which). It was just a little repetitive, not at all big though.

@esther-c

The chapters are good so far, I like the cozy feel. I agree with @savannah_grace2009 that it’s moving a bit fast, but other than that everything’s good. Nice job!!

@hybridlore

March 8th sounds good, I think I’ll be free then.

@keilah-h

it still took me a while to get it right, but considering I was only doing a headshot (pun intended) it was done quickly since I didn’t have to worry about anything under his neck.

Ah, that makes sense.

@stephie

Just saw this now, is it ok if I answer or no? It’s okay if not.

@hybridlore

(Let us know if anything changes! 😉)

I will 🙂

I’ll tag the art people. Don’t feel obligated to reply.

@loopylin @ellette-giselle @whalekeeper @keilah-h @linus-smallprint @grcr @elishavet-pidyon @i-know-im-forgetting-someone-please-help

@grcr

Ohh, I’d love one! I’ll have to pick a character, though 🤔

@ellette-giselle

For some reason I thought of you IMMEDIATELY (probably because we’ve had so many conversations about slapping your writing on paper and NEVER GOING BACK (something that I struggle to not do since I’m a perfectionist lol))

It’s okay!!! I completely understand and I can’t even imagine how hard the past few weeks have been for…[Read more]

I’m a bit late to this.

My art definitely bleeds into my writing a lot. All of my stories have some sort of color palette in my mind, and a lot of my characters, especially from Paper Stars, started as drawings I made. (Ex. Dante, Lemonhead, Mel) And my obsession with turning my old school work into origami stars a few years ago is what inspired…[Read more]

@esther-c

Ok! Yeah, again, do what you wanna do. But if you want some ideas or need a brainstorming partner just lmk!

I will!!! TYSM!!! 🙃

Yes I totally get it!! You definitely don’t have to go through and try to fix everything in the first draft 🥴

ahhhh hahaha yeah, I’d definitely get in trouble with @ellette-giselle if I did that…. (jk jk h…[Read more]

@esther-c

Ohhhh my wordddd

Ok that actually makes so much sense. I felt like the story was moving too fast and wasn’t exactly sure how to slow it down.

Thanks for pointing that out!! <33

Glad I was able to help!!!!!

I do love your dialogue though…you’re so talented in that area!!! Just maybe breaking it up would help A LOT. Because too much o…[Read more]

@stephie

I feel like it totally depends on the situation.

Though, at least for me, something doesn’t feel right about saying “your religion is wrong and false.” Because that tends to get people defensive and push them away from Jesus. I feel way more comfortable with saying “I believe that there is only one God….(etc…)” and just sharing what…[Read more]

Even you were wrong, but believed you were right, I still think it would be good to disagree with the other person.

All of what I said still depends on the situation and the intentions of the people involved, though.

@stephie

Yes. There are some social situations where it would be inappropriate or pointless to start a fight with someone like that, but if the topic came up, then yes. Tell what you believe is the truth. Staying silent or affirming a something that you do not actually believe in is deceiving the person you are talking with. Yes, it might sting…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Ohhhh my wordddd

Ok that actually makes so much sense. I felt like the story was moving too fast and wasn’t exactly sure how to slow it down.

Thanks for pointing that out!! <33

@grcr

Mmm. If that’s how other books do it, I guess it could work. I looked it up and some people say to extend the vowels and smooth con…

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