PrincesaChronicle22

@grcr ahhh whatttt??? 🤩🤩 Girl, I would be HONORED if you drew one of my characters.

the only question is…which one?? 😂

@koshka

My warning wouldn’t be that it’s dark or violent, but that you don’t want to even accidentally imply it’s okay. You don’t want to give your reader an idea, or thought pattern they didn’t have, but you do want to reach for a kid who’s been there, or is there, and needs that lifeline. That they are loved, that they can make it with God’s he…

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@keilah-h

Arcane and Alder are good name switches! I like them. Also, are you going to keep the Payne and Pythonos references? I think you should; when you publish your book people will be like “oh, this is an expansion on that universe.”

I think I will keep the Payne/Pythonos. I agree, it would be cool!!!!

Thanks, they fit really well and I lik…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Thank you so much!!!!

I fixed the spelling!! Thanks for catching that XD
I appreciate you so so SO much, girl <3

@koshka @ellette-giselle @hybridlore @theducktator @keilah-h @theshadow @anyone-else

Thank you everyone for your comments on the doc!!

The reason I haven’t added anything new is because I moved it all to Reedsy. Reedsy will professionally typeset it all, and have a more professional look to it, and I like Reedsy better for writing.

The point of…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

First of all, that’s awesome that you’re writing this!!!

Second, I’ll try to get around to reading and suggesting things on this. The homework load shouldn’t be too bad this week so hopefully I’ll have time to finish it.

@hybridlore

Thank you soooo much girl…

@theducktator

Really?? tysmmm that means a lot <3

@the_lost-journal

Just curious, what’s with your current signature? The other mother never said that… Also she’s a creepy villainous monster…

Sorry, I’m just confused lol

@koshka

Yeah…I think mostly I need to write like two more pieces, and then it’s just editing the rest. So hopefully this is doable XDXD *hopefully**

I think I just need enthusiastic pep talking right now, but emailing would help a lot too!!!

@ellette-giselle

That’s totally fine!!! Just don’t let me give up lollll

That’s the main thing I’m…[Read more]

Also, this isn’t going to be a novel. More like a collection of works that intertwine somehow.

I mainly just need accountability, but I would love your guys’ thoughts because I want this to be GOOD!!! It is going to a silent auction after all hahahaha

SO please tear it apart as well XD

@whalekeeper @elishavet-pidyon

Putting another character in here

Lois

“Hey, Brea,” Lois said after finding his sister’s hiding spot in the library. She turned around in her chair to face him, looking surprised.

“I just got Mother’s letter saying you were coming. Why she didn’t bother to use the telephone is beyond me. How are you doing?”…[Read more]

@theducktator

Liko 

“Mandatory?” Liko scratched his chin thoughtfully. “I doubt it. How can you have fun at a party you’re forced to go to? Though, I wouldn’t know for sure. I’m just the janitor.” He cringed inwardly, thinking about giant mess he’d have to help clean up in the ballroom later that night.

“Why? Scared to go?”

@rae Aww Chase 🙁  The twins would have visited him in the hospital, but they didn’t know that he was there and they didn’t have much time to wonder about him.

@stephie
Oh yes, I’ll be praying! <3

@theducktator
Yay!! Praise the Lord!!!

@stephie

Thats horrible. Praying

@theducktator

Yay, that’s wonderful!!! Praying for you and your brother

@hybridlore

It is a good word, isn’t it? Using too many synonyms can be a problem though too (probably my biggest XD).

@ellette-giselle

Great, thank you! Do you want me to post references for the clothes?