PrincesaChronicle22

Those sound good. I should learn to make something other than kraft mac n cheese.

@whalekeeper I love those XD

@rae what does purple mean again?

Idk why, but referencing things from farther back in the rp just makes me really happy, whether it’s me doing it or someone else

@rae

Felicity

“Oh, right.” Felicity had really only been introduced to this herself about a week ago.

“You just…” She fumbled with the tab on her soda, struggling to get her nail underneath. Finally she did, and she popped it open. There was a hissing sound and suddenly foam started pouring out the top and over the sides. Felicity yelped in…[Read more]

@keilah-h yea basically! @freed_and_redeemed thank you! ALSO HIII!

@the_lost-journal

Sorry for taking so LONNNGGGG to reply!

Well now we’re even because I took FOREVER to reply as well!! 🤣 So sorry!!! 😭

Oh, yeah I should’ve mentioned that! About how mega churches are almost always portrayed badly. (Ofc there are some awful mega churches.) But what I mean about “giving them a good church experience” is truly b…

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@savannah_grace2009

Yes, of course girl!! <333

@savannah_grace2009

Thanks!! <33

one thing I’ll suggest, is that I feel like you don’t really introduce the family to us in the first few chapters. At first I wasn’t even sure if Blake was their sibling or not XDXD

They do have a HUGE family, so setting a solid foundation and making all the siblings and the parents unique and established in ou…

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@freed_and_redeemed

Wyoh apparently doesn’t like to notify me when you tag me 😑 Anywayyyy Loved the scene! But also feel so bad for Riker!! 😥

@the_lost-journal

Oh cool! Awesome!!

@godlyfantasy12 Poor November and Ara😭

BUT I LOVE THE SCENES

Callan is…💀 and I ADORE Ara’s uncle already🤭

and I think you portrayed that scene very well without going into explaining it completely and rather leaving it vague.

Job very well done👏👏👏

@esther-c @keilah-h @ellette-giselle @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12 (btw, I’ve been LOVING the scenes you’ve been posting, girl🤩) @rae @theducktator @grcr @anyone-else-idk-lol

Y’all want a Riker scene for Book #3? 🫣

well here it is anyway (part of it at least)

What did Leon know?

As far as Riker knew, Leon had a good, loving…

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@rae

Felicity

She grinned.

“Great! Come on, it’s this way.”

Chase hesitantly followed her down the hall.

The vending machine sat like a crumpled tin can against the wall, with a yellow note taped to its front reading “out of order” in messy sharpie handwriting. It had pictures printed all over it, advertising various drink brands. Somehow…[Read more]

@the_lost-journal

Pax

@the_lost-journal

No worries! That’s still serious and important and I’ll keep praying 🙏🏻🫶🏻

@koshka Thank you! Yes, while I’m probably going to aim a bit in the middle of YA and Middle grade, I’m just not sure how comfortable I am at least in this drafting stage with certain issues and of course this is a CLEAN work/series, so while I will deal with heavy issues, making it more YA, and writing style as well (I hope lol!) I don’t want to…[Read more]

@the_lost-journal

Praying for our sister and our cousin’s friend

@esther-c

Liking the story so far, it’s good. I second Trailblazer’s suggestions though, as more description would draw the reader in more.

and if it feels like im just bullying November I am SORRY its just cuz im writing the first scenes/first book and basically this book has a lot of rough scenes for November…this was his life…sad to say…It gets better gang! He has some good scenes with Ara!

and yea, I know its rough….no critiques plz XD