@princesachronicle22
Active 2 months, 2 weeks ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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TheShadow replied to the topic The Woods of Rosen in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
Thank you, and thanks for letting me know!
Some stuff happened, so I’ll probably be posting the first chapter later today.
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TheShadow replied to the topic Nonhuman Sentient Beings in the forum Fantasy 1 year ago
Lol, if he has them XD
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HighScribe replied to the topic Rant away! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
Wow, I just watched a video of someone playing one and that is so cool.
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Esther replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
@savannah_grace2009 @theducktator @grcr @smiley @keilah-h @theshadow
Chapter 24
Hallie walked into school, gripping onto the straps of her backpack. Because of all that had gone on recently, she hadn’t gone to school for the past few days. But by Thursday, Mom declared it time to get back into the normal rhythm of life.
How can anything go b…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
Okay, I’m all caught up (also was gone for a while), and this is a really engaging story. I did feel sad when Tyler was gone, so good job there, and I like how everything is going.
Thank you so much!!
A few things, I’ve noticed you used something along the lines of “(Character’s name) hated…” to describe what they were feeling, so…
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HighScribe replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
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TheShadow replied to the topic Summer 2025 Project: The Ashen Star (Working Title) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
I’ll check it out (thanks @hybridlore for tagging).
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TheShadow replied to the topic Nonhuman Sentient Beings in the forum Fantasy 1 year ago
also they probably have joint ownership of like 5 brain cells lol
Lol, five might be a little generous XD
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TheShadow replied to the topic The Woods of Rosen in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
Thank you! I’ll try posting on Thursdays.
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TheShadow replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
I’m good, thanks. Thank you for adding me!!
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HighScribe replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year ago
I mean The Nether through Cave Spider Rollercoaster kind of had a story, but it was more like crazy event after another as they tried to get back to the PC.
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HighScribe replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year ago
The first two seasons are definitely not as good, but they’re also just supposed to be fun and developing the character’s personalities. They’re not intended to be as reliant on story.
If you haven’t ever played Minecraft I definitely see how you might not have liked the first two (or fourth) seasons.
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HighScribe replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year ago
Because the King and Purple’s stories are amazing?
Did you not like it or did you just not find it sad?
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HighScribe replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year ago
All of them? Including Noteblock Universe and The King?
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TheShadow replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
Hey!! What’s up, how have you been? I’m really sorry that I wasn’t responding for a while, but I’m just about done with the first part, is it okay if I read and give you some thoughts about the second one? It’s really good so far, Everett is definitely my favorite (always love a musical man).
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TheShadow replied to the topic The Woods of Rosen in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
@keilah-h @hybridlore @ellette-giselle @the_lost-journal @liberty @whalekeeper @linus-smallprint
It has been a very long time since I last posted on this topic (3 months apparently). First, I’d like to thank everyone who read my draft; it was a huge help, and helped me re-evaluate my entire story.
Second, I re-evaluated my story and have chang…[Read more]
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TheShadow replied to the topic Nonhuman Sentient Beings in the forum Fantasy 1 year ago
Lol, that’s hilarious! Love the little interaction with Huntress, it’s perfect.
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TheShadow replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
Okay, I’m all caught up (also was gone for a while), and this is a really engaging story. I did feel sad when Tyler was gone, so good job there, and I like how everything is going. A few things, I’ve noticed you used something along the lines of “(Character’s name) hated…” to describe what they were feeling, so changing that up a bit mi…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
Be careful out there, fellow writers 👀😂
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HighScribe replied to the topic Alan Becker Fans in the forum Film 1 year, 1 month ago
(: thank you.
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