@princesachronicle22
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 11 months ago
For all you ladies on here, there’s an online camp that runs every few months, set up sort of like our little kingdom here to help encourage writers and help them reach a goal. Before camp you’ll set a goal for yourself (writing ## chapters/scenes/blog posts/words/etc.) and try to reach it in that month. You’re a part of a tent of about 10 or so…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Hall of Characters in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 11 months ago
Yayayayayayyyy!
I’ll definitely be posting on here this weekend!!
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 11 months ago
Oooh, I like it!! I could definitely feel and experience what Jonathan was feeling and going through.
The only suggestion I would have would be to eliminate some of the passive voice (“The floor was sinking…” “…his brother was on his hands and knees…”). It will tighten up the prose and draw the reader in more.
But that’…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 11 months ago
Thanks for reaching out, Kefa!! I’d love to chat some more!! 🤗
Hmm… my WIP…
Well, I have a few, but a couple of those have been put on the back burner for now. They were mostly ones written while I was trying to figure out my genre. Which, I’ve decided, is probably gonna be contemporary young adult fiction and histori…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 11 months ago
Yeah, I mean, it’s really no big deal to me because they’re spelled slightly different (Halle and Hallie), and how they look and act is completely different so they’re very different people in my head. 🤷🏻♀️
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 11 months ago
Your mc house looks cool! What mod is it?
Btw what do you think of the new update so far?
Oh also I got the first clone wars dvd at the thrift store! It’s only 3 episodes but it’s the first three and I like it so far.
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 11 months ago
Loved that snippet! I like how the reader is just as confused as Jonathan, I kinda felt like I was reading an anime lol.
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 11 months ago
Pov you just notice that you created a new character with a name that nobody you know irl has but literally meet someone with that name a few months later
😑😑
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HighScribe replied to the topic Write to bring me pain. in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 11 months ago
@the-lost_journal
That was brilliant. 👏👏
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TheShadow replied to the topic Couple RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 11 months ago
…I have actually never had a smore so…I am learning with the charries
What?? We need to send you one ASAP.
@kielah-h @theducktator @princesachronicle22 @kyronthearcanin
Azalea
Everyone seemed much happier now, annd Azalea smiled. It was nice sitting there with Trevor… well, with everyone. Right. Fairy had run over to Silvanus, and came…[Read more]
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TheShadow replied to the topic Nonhuman Sentient Beings in the forum Fantasy 1 year, 11 months ago
TF2’s crazy lore means anything goes, unlike most fandoms where you kinda have to stick to a few rules about worldbuilding, so I can run wild with this stuff.
Nice!
You learn something new every day, haha
Lol.
Also I’m not even going to try responding to the other thing on the thread, it was very painful on the phone. I was goi…[Read more]
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TheShadow replied to the topic short scene! in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 1 year, 11 months ago
*Sees the cookie box is already empty* *Refills it with caramel popcorn*
Yum!
He is supposed to not know why this is happening. So… yeah. XD
Okay, that makes more sense.
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TheShadow replied to the topic I have an Idea! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 11 months ago
Horror –
I like Edgar Allan Poe and FrankensteinHorror can be good, it just has to have some redeem ability to it and can’t be too scary. Like Frankenstein has a great message and theme, but others a majority of the time are pretty gory or scary for the sake of being scary and in no way helpful. That’s my view at least…[Read more] -
TheShadow replied to the topic Gauging Interest in a Special New RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 11 months ago
This is a great idea, I might join but i also have two RP’s I’m not keeping up with well.
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TheShadow replied to the topic Nonhuman Sentient Beings in the forum Fantasy 1 year, 11 months ago
Woah, that’s really cool lore! I like it a lot, it’s really creative. Where did you get these ideas?
Salamandrion hybrids are extremely rare. The other species mostly can’t survive on Coreworld–the lava-covered home planet of the salamander-like race–and in turn, Salamandrion can’t survive without protective gear on other planets. Bu…
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TheShadow replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 11 months ago
Also the website is being really weird right now, so ignore the italicization of the parts that weren’t originally.
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TheShadow replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 11 months ago
I know that feeling! (lol)
XD
Sorry!! I hate keeping you guys waiting, if you want to keep going along you can, it’s totally okay. Thanks for being so patient, and Percival does have some things to work out XD.
Rowen
Silence settled as they are. Hugo still slept, and Percival glanced at Rowen as if he were insane, and s…
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HighScribe replied to the topic Gauging Interest in a Special New RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 11 months ago
👍
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HighScribe replied to the topic I'd like some thoughts on this scene in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 11 months ago
I think it’s really good. The way you wrote it really feels close and suffocating, especially the first paragraph, which I think works really well.
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HighScribe replied to the topic Gauging Interest in a Special New RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 11 months ago
When should we start adding characters?
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