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@savannah_grace2009 @theducktator @grcr @smiley @keilah-h @theshadow

Chapter 24

Hallie walked into school, gripping onto the straps of her backpack. Because of all that had gone on recently, she hadn’t gone to school for the past few days. But by Thursday, Mom declared it time to get back into the normal rhythm of life.

How can anything go b…[Read more]

@theshadow

Okay, I’m all caught up (also was gone for a while), and this is a really engaging story. I did feel sad when Tyler was gone, so good job there, and I like how everything is going.

Thank you so much!!

A few things, I’ve noticed you used something along the lines of “(Character’s name) hated…” to describe what they were feeling, so…

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@ellette-giselle

Of course! XD

Also, you hit 4,000 posts!!

@jonas

I’ll check it out (thanks @hybridlore for tagging).

@keilah-h

also they probably have joint ownership of like 5 brain cells lol

Lol, five might be a little generous XD

@ellette-giselle

Thank you! I’ll try posting on Thursdays.

@hybridlore

I’m good, thanks. Thank you for adding me!!

@keilah-h

I mean The Nether through Cave Spider Rollercoaster kind of had a story, but it was more like crazy event after another as they tried to get back to the PC.

@ellette-giselle

The first two seasons are definitely not as good, but they’re also just supposed to be fun and developing the character’s personalities. They’re not intended to be as reliant on story.

If you haven’t ever played Minecraft I definitely  see how you might not have liked the first two (or fourth) seasons.

@ellette-giselle

Because the King and Purple’s stories are amazing?

Did you not like it or did you just not find it sad?

@ellette-giselle

All of them? Including Noteblock Universe and The King?

@hybridlore

Hey!! What’s up, how have you been? I’m really sorry that I wasn’t responding for a while, but I’m just about done with the first part, is it okay if I read and give you some thoughts about the second one? It’s really good so far, Everett is definitely my favorite (always love a musical man).

@keilah-h @hybridlore @ellette-giselle @the_lost-journal @liberty @whalekeeper @linus-smallprint

It has been a very long time since I last posted on this topic (3 months apparently). First, I’d like to thank everyone who read my draft; it was a huge help, and helped me re-evaluate my entire story.

Second, I re-evaluated my story and have chang…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Lol, that’s hilarious! Love the little interaction with Huntress, it’s perfect.

@esther-c

Okay, I’m all caught up (also was gone for a while), and this is a really engaging story. I did feel sad when Tyler was gone, so good job there, and I like how everything is going. A few things, I’ve noticed you used something along the lines of “(Character’s name) hated…” to describe what they were feeling, so changing that up a bit mi…[Read more]

Be careful out there, fellow writers 👀😂

@linus-smallprint

(: thank you.

@keilah-h @linus-smallprint

Yeah, probably, I just like overthinking :p

@linus-smallprint

And in Wanted when tco is flying past the wind turbines we see a brief shot of him from behind and it doesn’t even look like his torso is connected to his head, which it would be if it was 2D.

@linus-smallprint

Hm, I kind of think it’s a sphere based on just how it looks in the 3D world (in Wanted you get a lot of shots of tco flying from above and it seems like a sphere), but the shorts do seem to imply that they’re flat…

Plus, in ‘Victim’, when victim holds the flower wreath to his face, we see it from the side and if his head was…[Read more]