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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
@hallie-jean @e-m-trepke @power
Feather and Rinzler
“You need food?” Feather asked. “I sorta ran out of rations quite a bit ago, but there’s bound to be a kitchen somewhere.”
“I see you eyeing my discs. Don’t touch them unless you want one to your throat.” Rinzler hissed.
Hesh and Kent stood off to the side, watching.
“Rinzler!” Feather…[Read more]
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Jean Coul replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
Sorry for the late response!!! 🙂
Everett
“Judging from your question,” Feather asked, “you don’t happen to be the castle’s owner or know who it is?”
Everett forced himself to stop glaring at Rinzler and look at the girl instead, but the guy’s grouchy voice still rang through his head– if I hadn’t already re…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
@e-m-trepke @power @hallie-jean
Rinzler
“The ‘Dark Player?’” Rinzler eyed the kid dubiously. They looked to be close in age, but that didn’t mean he trusted him. If anything, he trusted him even less than he trusted Hesh or Kent. “With a name like that, if I hadn’t already realized you’re completely foreign, I would’ve thought you were from m…[Read more]
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Jean Coul replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
Yay! Another character! Can I have a brief description?? It sounds like maybe another character from the Star Wars universe, but I could be wrong..? Also, I like the mysterious ‘dark past’ vibes!
Once again, I mean no disrespect! I apologize for my character’s attitude, and I think you guys’ charries are awesome!…[Read more]
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E. M. Trepke replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 2 months ago
Hesh
Hesh could see the same bewilderment that had once plagued him reflected on this boy’s– Dark Player’s– face. He saw Dark Player’s eye narrow in distrust. That was mutual. Hesh didn’t trust him any farther than… never mind. He didn’t trust this ‘Dark Player’ at all. It was clear that Hesh wasn’t the only one…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 2 months ago
@e-m-trepke @power @hallie-jean
Feather and Rinzler
“Well, you’re a persistent one, aren’t you, love?” The new character smirked.
Feather wasn’t quite sure what to say to that. Rinzler growled audibly.
“All right. I’ll give you a deal. I’ll tell you my name…. if you can tell me where I am.” said the new character.
Feather looked around.…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 started the topic Age Gap in the forum Characters 4 years, 2 months ago
Hey y’all! So, I’ve got a question and wanted some advice! I know we’ve got some romance writers, and while I’m not really looking for “romance” I am looking for some advice and figure some ppl could help me, specifically @gracie-j maybe? GRACIE CAN U HELP ME?
Okie so…before we start here is some disclaimers…
1. What I’m looking for is ad…[Read more]
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EmilySF started the topic Side Characters (FP,WS) in the forum Characters 4 years, 2 months ago
SO, I have two side character (or three) that I need to develop a bit more.
(This is for the story I was asking about the death of a character, if anyone remembers that… the WIP acronymed FP,WS.)
So, the MC has two students he’s teaching.
The theme is about changing the world and how you change the world in a meaningful way.
I already know…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 2 months ago
@e-m-trepke @power @hallie-jean
Feather and Rinzler
“Well,” said Feather, “that was rude.”
“Hmmph,” came Rinzler’s voice. He was still looking in the character’s direction.
“Don’t hurt him, Rinzler.” Feather told him. “That’ll make him even less likely to trust us.” She walked up to the character and stood in his line of sight. “My name’s…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 2 months ago
@hallie-jean Maybe my characters could meet yours!
Feather and Rinzler
“Did you hear that?” Rinzler had both discs out, wary.
“It’s probably nothing,” Feather reassured him. They were out of the dungeons, wandering through the hallway again. Hesh and Kent were engaged in conversation behind them.
Suddenly, another c…[Read more]
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E. M. Trepke replied to the topic Hello! I thought I should probably introduce myself… in the forum Start HERE 4 years, 2 months ago
Why, hello there, @power.
Favourite sword? How can one decide?
Favourite sci-fi/fantasy books? How can one decide that either? Ok… let’s see. I will write a list of some that I have read.
The Lord of the Rings, The Hobbit, most of the Silmarillion, 5 books of The Wheel of Time, almost all of the Shannara books, The Chronicles of Narnia, The…[Read more]
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E. M. Trepke replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 2 months ago
Hesh
His head pounded as if all the forces of Merscwarn had waged battle in his skull. Ow. He sat up, leaned against a cold damp wall, and breathed. Slowly his head-fog began to clear. Feather and Rinzler had already regained consciousness and were fiddling with the lock of the chamber’s door.
Since someone had gone through al…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 2 months ago
Feather and Rinzler
Feather awoke to darkness.
After a few minutes, her eyes adjusted to the dark to see Rinzler beside her, his lights glowing dimly. He sat up, and they flared a little brighter. Kent and Hesh were lying in the other corner, just waking up.
“Where are we?” Rinzler asked.
“Don’t know.” Feather replied.…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 2 months ago
Feather sniffed at the air. “Do you smell something?”
Kent, the leopard creature, sniffed it too.
Hesh had been asking questions, but he suddenly stopped and shouted, “Hold your breath!” He collapsed, and Rinzler gave him a confused look before he, too, fell to the ground.
Feather’s vision was getting blurry. She thought s…[Read more]
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E. M. Trepke replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 2 months ago
Hesh
Hesh pondered what Feather had told him. “So starships are like airships that can fly between worlds? And scientists experiment on people? Your world is many worlds?” All these new ideas were making his head spin. He promised to himself to never let any of this past his mouth once he got back home— if he got back home.…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 2 months ago
Feather and Rinzler
The cat introduced himself as Kent Briggs. “Like I asked him,” said Feather, “what’s your world like? What is it called? You remind me of one of the creatures from legends I’ve read, as I might have explained before.”
Rinzler looked around at the bright sky above him. “You think there are any native inh…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 2 months ago
Feather and Rinzler
“Well, we technically come from two different worlds in the same universe, separated by vast stretches of space.” Feather explained. “That’s where the starships come in. They’re a little like water ships, but they have different shapes and engines on the back. They fly instead of traveling in the sea.” She…[Read more]
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E. M. Trepke replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 2 months ago
Hesh
The relief of breathing fresh air once again came like a breath of fresh air. They must have had taken a wrong turn though, because instead of entering the guardhouse, they came out of the passage in a small courtyard overgrown with rose vines. He gazed up at the sky. A few distant clouds skittered across the sky like a…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 2 months ago
Feather
Rinzler wasn’t taking their companions too well. Feather could see it in his expression. She could have a talk with him later.
“Here we are,” said Hesh, gesturing to the door they’d come through. They exited to a clear sky.
Feather looked back. “You two are from different worlds than Rinzler and I are. What are you…[Read more]
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E. M. Trepke replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 2 months ago
Hesh
Hesh led the way back up the dim passage. With every step away from that door, he felt his heart grow a little lighter.
He could tell that Rinzler was still suspicious of him, but now mad as well for Hesh’s introduction of them to the cat. Hesh could handle Rinzler. In this place, they were going to need all the allies t…[Read more]
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