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Sara replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 days, 1 hour ago
To everyone who threw snow at me:
I haven’t been on here in a hot second, sorry everyone!!!! Ahhh….
I actually did a TON of editing today, and I’m so obsessed with my writing!
I’m not going to post the part I worked on on KP, just because I feel like it could be too dark for some people (Idk though…) I promise it’s not super dark, but a…[Read more]
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Sara replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 days, 1 hour ago
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 3 days, 3 hours ago
Aw… it’s Leon. ❤️ I’m so happy find he’s stealing your heart again. I am concerned about this “broken it” comment, lol.
I really like the picture of him cooking with his daughter. It says a lot about him as a person and their situation. And the quotes are perfection.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 days, 3 hours ago
Very nice! Although I have not watched the movies (I saw part of the first one?) I can definitely apply all you said to the books. Including writing stories more like Narnia instead.
*chokes on snow*
Yay! Onnendel is becoming my favorite of the cast. XD
Oh. Ick.
I should have seen that coming. That’s ugly. Wow. *…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Writing Characters of the Opposite Gender in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 days, 3 hours ago
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Writing Characters of the Opposite Gender in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 days, 3 hours ago
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Writing Characters of the Opposite Gender in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 days, 3 hours ago
I would like to inform those who may be concerned for my sanity.
I have a brother.
On a side note, I regret to share the recent passing of one Black Mongoose. 😉
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Writing Characters of the Opposite Gender in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 days, 4 hours ago
Beahahaha!?!!?! Squigaldy Squagaldy spiggals!!!!!!!¡¡¡
TBM
PWR
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Writing Characters of the Opposite Gender in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 days, 7 hours ago
Stupendous points! Those are things I’ve thought about with a shudder. Some of our soldiers captured in Afghanistan were women. In one situation, she was the only one to survive because the medical staff of the place didn’t want to see her die.
Our Marine grandfather told my mother that she’d enlist “over his dead body.” Meanwhile, a…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 days, 23 hours ago
Poor kid. XD
Well, he’s basically old enough to graduate, right?
We could just…idk, make him Leo’s apprentice or something. That could be funny. And crazy. And possibly dangerous, so maybe we shouldn’t.
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 days ago
So we could certainly use Barnes’s help.
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 days ago
It is a bit confusing. XD
I was taking them to Leo’s apartment (since the apartments have also been introduced before) to get them to a safe place where we can come up with a plan.
In order for Silvia, Quincy, and Rory to go back to school, we’re going to have to defeat/remove/in some way displace the Agents (and apparently for Leo…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 days, 2 hours ago
Leo
He looked back over at Rory, a smile twitching his lips. The strain of carrying Quincy was obviously getting to him, but Leo hesitated to take back the small boy. Rory looked more like…himself with that small head tucked against his neck. More alive and real.
What had he asked?
“Ah. Not far, no.” But not…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 days, 3 hours ago
Oops. Once again the amazingly brilliant Koshka forgets to complete and submit her RP. XD
Leo
The street was quiet, making him glanced at passing windows to watch their reflection.
Still no agents.
But his shoulders itched with the feeling of something just beyond perception. Irritating. He shoved his hands in…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 days, 5 hours ago
He has become his own character with his own separate struggles and personality. Plot wise? Yeah, it’s different.
If you mean you’re safe to start knocking them off…😎 Beware of repercussions. 😎
Just kidding. Do what is best for the story.
Oh goodness! I love that girl!!!
You know, she would be fun in a RP with my charrie…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 days, 5 hours ago
This is getting very interesting! I wonder what shenanigans will follow now they’re all together, yet I’m worried about who is getting struck next.
Amelia is a sweetheart with a spine of steel. I love when she’s on set.
One thing that caught me:
Joseph could still remember the way and rode eagerly along the streets until they…
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic You know you are a writer when… in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 days ago
I’m glad it’s a good one. I’ve imagined telling it to little kids at reenactments (Which is to say, I’ve imagined being in reenactments).
Crater Base sounds interesting! Sibling built stories are the best.
You know, we played some elaborate games with our dolls, Littlest Petshops, and LEGOs, but I think our stuffed animals were the…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 days ago
@freed_and_redeemed @whalekeeper
I wrote a happy scene and a rather sad scene. However, the happy scene would makes very little sense to anyone reading the story, so I’m sharing the sad one. XD
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There was too much silence in his room. Onnendel pushed himself up on his elbow to see over the mound of pillows. The sunlight that splashed across…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 days, 2 hours ago
@whalekeeper @freed_and_redeemed
I’ll take care of my 20 snowballs later, but I think I can get y’all’s two dusted off.
That is, if you want some backstory set up for our serial story that’s currently on pause. 🙂
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 days, 2 hours ago
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