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@whalekeeper

no I haven’t!!!

@whoever @koshka

I am once more on the infamous computer that does not do accent marks.  My darling is sad. He needs his daily dose of flair.

Reuven

Large, echoing corridors filled with rushing students and chatting staff swallowed Reuven up into their midst. He gripped the straps to his duffle and ducked by a group of arguing teens. The…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Oh, good one! I recently learned a lot about how my brain works by comparing my drawings to my writing style. For instance, I like to find little details that describe a whole, whether that’s in water color or prose. Then I realized that I notice little things in my environment, to the point that I might miss something obvious…[Read more]

Doesn’t everyone have at least a fragment of virtue though? (Sorry, I don’t mean to shut down everything you’re saying, this is just my thoughts. 😅) I’m not saying they have to be someone that the readers will look up to and be like, “Oh my word I want to be just like them.” I understand mankind is sinful and there probably are people out there t…

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@esther-c

Now, you mentioned your characters not knowing God. And I liked how you put that—“without God there is no hope.” But…you have to think that these characters are probably looking for hope, right? Even just an occasional thought of wishing there was a way out of this darkness they’re living in.

So I know with where they’re at right now,…

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@loopylin

idk, KP actually glitched one time because highscribe called me such things so it blocked me for being a threat or something. I’m gonna look back and see what she said. I may end up doing it and scaring a few newbies.

Well, because the pocket knife is replaceable. Change isn’t too hard to come by. The picture….. well he can’t get…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Ha! Took me a second to figure out where this is going……. I’ll be surprised if they’re both still alive and out of jail by the end of the day.

Lol

You kidding me? The police have already tried to take Alpha (when he stabbed Jep and Chase went to the hospital) and well, Alpha hasn’t stepped foot in the station yet.

@theducktator @ellette-giselle

I bet he’s gonna die in the end.

He can’t die; I like him too much!

Oh dear…well, two more stories left and then you’ll know. Don’t worry, Baron will be happy with the ending.

 I would love to see this published someday!

Hopefully sometime in Spring I will submit it to a publisher. Fingers crossed though cuz…[Read more]

@esther-c

I also hope I didn’t come across as rude or brushing you off…I really do appreciate your thoughts because that means I need to work on foreshadowing! And explaining my book to others helps me flesh out my thoughts a little more! Thank you so much! <3

@rae

Alpha’s gonna be so mad lol

this is too good.

@loopylin

I would’ve gone for the photo. Nothing like a good photo to hold hostage. 😉

@linus-smallprint

Oh, I get it. I thought Quinton was the name.

Okay….. hmm. This’ll be interesting. Your grandmother is a woman of good taste when it comes to names if I do say so myself.

If Kleins and Roland aren’t important to the story anymore, spending too much time with them may only make the reader disappointed when they are left b…

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@linus-smallprint

Uh…. not really. It’s kind of a mess.

So wait, how many brothers are there. I got Julian, Roland, Adrian, and Quinton, (almost because I had a Quin)

Are there two or three more?

I was kind of surprised that Leon and Julian are headed out since for both of the previous books, the protagonists just ended up staying with…

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@keilah-h

HAPPY BIRTHDAY!

Love the lizard. Is that cheese cake?

@hypridlore @loopylin

*Dusts off those ten+3 snowballs*

*Realizes I have 42 words worth of snow left on me*

I am 608 words into my 1,500 word essay. XD

@hybridlore

okay thanks! I’ll think about it!

@esther-c

Ok, so the biggest thing I noticed was the lack of hope throughout the story. The characters seemed to think about death a lot and were put through a lot of physical pain. There’s nothing inherently wrong with that, but it needs to be balanced out with hope. When I got to read those Lilitu/Sef memories from when they were little, that w…

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@hybridlore

okay, well I may wait until next time. i have a tone of stuff going on. We’ll see. 😉

@hybridlore

That sounds like a lot of fun!I might have to do it.

When is it?

@hybridlore

what is it?