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Active 2 weeks, 6 days ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
Okay that’s a cool character arc then!!
I’ll keep watching from the shadows and once the draft is over I’ll give you more input on that XD
And I’m glad that Hallie’s talking to God again <33 even if it’s slow progress
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Last of The Righteous in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
Hey! Scythe! My dad and brothers LOVE that game. Funny thing is, I can’t stand it, but I’m the one that got them into it by buying it for them. 😂 Weirdly enough, I was picturing this kingdom like the scythe art, so that’s super funny.
i really, really like this!!! The narrative and flow and style is 100% a step above…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Summarize your story in one weird sentence! in the forum Topic of the Week 1 year, 3 months ago
don’t all eyes have blood in them though?
True, just his are completely red in the sclera
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Ruth replied to the topic Summarize your story in one weird sentence! in the forum Topic of the Week 1 year, 3 months ago
Guy with eyes that look like they have blood in them tries to get revenge on humanoid spider.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic An Adventure Story in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
Sorry. Didn’t see this until now.
I’m fine, and they’re fine. Was pretty shaken up, but also weirdly cool. It was a very interesting experience all around.
Gave me some insight into writing adrenaline charged characters.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Last of The Righteous in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
*enraged because I was never tagged by KP*
I will look at this as soon as I can. aka tomorrow.
Maybe.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
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Koshka replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 3 months ago
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Jaybird replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
Signing in for the long haul. I can look for rogue grammar and suspicious word choices.
Code key: nuanced syntax.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 3 months ago
Perfect!
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Koshka replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 3 months ago
Agreed. We could let it move at whatever pace it can without needing to flip back 392764683 pages.
Yes! I haven’t had time to open it up yet (word is on the computer) but I’m hoping to in the next hour (we got an extended lunch break today!!!!).
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic An Adventure Story in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
wait…. did this hot my inbox really late….. or was I on there before it was released?! 😱
I literally just got done commenting and editing chapter 32
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic An Adventure Story in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
No kidding.
Plus someone crashed me yesterday going into town. Add that to the list. 🙄
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic An Adventure Story in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
I’m so sorry, I have been swamped. I kept trying, but i just haven’t got the time right now.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 3 months ago
Oh yes, an email thread would be best.
Oh, did you see that I have a chapter of the first book out?
I greatly needs your opinion!!
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Koshka replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 3 months ago
I could let him meet the mid-arc Leoron.
*Brain glitches*
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Koshka replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 3 months ago
Yes!!
Maybe we should throw them together in an RP…but I don’t really have time right now for a real one. *Gazes forlornly at the Fantasy School*
Maybe in an email thread. That way we don’t have to work with a school system or wander a Castle.
Hmm. If we both have time (which is a very big if). Otherwise they can just hear…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 3 months ago
*Screams and dances in a circle*
OH MY WORD!!!!!!!!
I so want Leo to meet Cass now. Those two would get along so well.
and all the world would suffer for it.
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