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@loopylin

This is a great question! Now I have to think… and think…

Dalton: Primary=Fight. Secondary=freeze He’s a warrior, but also a squirrel. Some things never change. This does come in handy though, since most of the others have fight pretty low down on their instincts.

Viktor: Primary=Flight. Secondary=Fight. Pretty standard. He’s…[Read more]

Now that I’m going back to the beginning…

This is really hard XD

because I know you’re trying to go for the “chaos” vibes of a big family as they get ready for church and the party. You set up Hallie, Easton, and the parents pretty well, especially for the fast-paced scene, but the other siblings kind of disappear throughout the book.

Maybe…[Read more]

@esther-c

To be honest, I’m not really sure.

I might have to reread it a little more and let you know XD

@esther-c

I would just like to see it set up a little more at the very beginning chapters.

I know you’re going for chaos on the Sunday morning before church, but like I mentioned before, since Easton and Hallie’s family is a big one, I think you need to focus more on their family and the dynamics. I’d love to see Hallie’s closeness with her mom…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

THANK YOU SO MUCH!!!! you’re the best and I always love exchanging ideas with you <3

I LOVE LITTLE HALLIE

@esther-c

yeah, Cars and Phones BROKE ME

Last week my mom was at Mayo Clinic in Rochester doing more cancer treatments, which was hard since it wasn’t planned. I guess even if it was, it would be hard since she was gone for over a week and me and my siblings and my dad were all missing her a lot and attempting to keep our house from going out of…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Someone suggested I cut the last section of the blurb and leave it with the part about Jonathan’s friendship because it has more of a cliffhanger. What do you think?

@whalekeeper

On here works great!

Also, any thoughts on the book cover?

@keilah-h

also mmm, I love cheesecake.

Why do I feel like Sniper would like cheesecake? XD. I don’t know, I can just picture him denying that he enjoys it.

@loopylin @theducktator @hybridlore @ellette-giselle @keilah

Thanks everyone!

@grcr

*Gaspeth!!!*

What have you done!!!

🤣

Well, there goes that. XD

@theducktator

don’t encourage me.

@theducktator

Aha, thank you. Fixed that.

Thank you so much for the feedback!!!!

DON’T KILL EVAN. I BEG YOU.

Oh how tantalizing this sounds…….. it would be such a sad death scene……………..

@rae

Yay!!! I am so glad that you had a good time!!!!! And I am so glad that you did it! That sounds like an amazing day!

Also,

@ellette-giselle @keilah-h @highscribeofaetherium @hybridlore @elishavet-pidyon

I was gonna update you last night, but I figured I’d wait and give you all the tea in one post.

Today we did it! We went out to all the little shops, and it was awesome! Four (three of which I wanted to look at sadly) were closed, but we still got to go to three…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Wow!! You are getting so much better at guys and girls! I can totally tell which is the girl. This looks really good!!

@the_lost-journal

Lol

thanks! That one isn’t out yet, but I do have some e that are published and for sale if you would ever be interested. 🙃

@grcr

OH MY WORD!!!!

Looking at it I suddenly realized how many of them I asked you to draw!!!! I can’t believe you pulled that off! My limit is about three people per picture and then I die. XD

THEY LOOK SO GOOD!!

Put it this way, I looked at it and new exactly who each one was, so that was brilliant!  Oh man, I can’t stop laughing…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon

Haha!!!