Power

ugh KP signed me out as I went to post, no!

@the_lost-journal @whalekeeper

The Protector—Gabriel

“Relax.” Gabriel adjusted his position, sitting with his legs crossed. “Inhale…hold it…exhale. Calm down your heart rate, it’s distressing you.”

Gabriel avoided Barnes’s question purposefully. What would everyone think if they knew his real age? Maybe they wouldn’t care, or they’d never r…[Read more]

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NEXT SECTION!!!

Leon and Julian enjoyed their time with Konner and his family, and the notice was almost forgotten in Julian’s pocket.

It was evening that they returned home. Fox had come back from the carpenters where he…

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@hybridlore

Maybe…….

In my world we don’t get to plan that far ahead. So I guess set the date and we’ll see if I can make it.

@rae

Ah, it’s adorable! I love the leaves and the way his hair is and the clean lines of the mouth. The details and proportions fit together perfectly. I’m very glad you posted it. 😁

@jonas

An accountability group like this would be great! Consistently writing large sections is not my strong point, lol. I have a fairly intense job this summer, but I’m still hoping to write in breaks, since I’m currently free of college.

I’m also not very comfortable with sharing much of my actual writing on an open forum like this.…[Read more]

@hybridlore

I should be available those first two dates. I won’t be the 7th. Ironically, it’s for a different zoom call. XD (intern stuff, not some rival group. 😉 )

Have you ever given a charrie of yours a weird mannerism that you have yourself?

A few of my charries like to sleep in a fetal position, or curled up around a pushie or blanket. And Gabriel stretches similar to a cat. Mannerisms I sometimes have.

@the_lost-journal @whalekeeper

The Protector—Gabriel

The scent of the smoke invaded Gabriel’s nostrils. It sickened him, but he remained silent, listening to Cassius’s talk about pleasure. Internally, he wondered if happiness and pleasure were different, and if they were, how were they different. A small plop sound woke him from his thoughts. H…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

How did the doctor visit go?

The Protector—Gabriel

Gabriel hesitated, before sitting on the stone, bringing his knees up to his chest. He tensed at the slightest noises, eyes darting to where Cassius and Leander slept. “Uh… so do you want me talk like the Protector, or like…my other persona? Or just not talk at all.”

@linus-smallprint

ah, that makes a little more sense.

okay then. Looks like we both win. I forgot their Babylonian names were used when they were set over provinces.

@linus-smallprint

still very confused…. Washing soap?

Really? It seemed Daniel’s friends are referred to by their Babylonian names, but maybe that is just in the book of Daniel. Huh. I guess the most famous stuff is what ends up sticking around more.

I can check my notes again, but when I did an indeph study into Daniel I’m almost positive the o…[Read more]

@theducktator

Lolololol. *high five*

@linus-smallprint

Thank you!

I spent at least an hour cleaning soap

what?!

Okay. Where are all those ladies and older people hiding?

In the olden days girls didn’t really do things on their own. In Roman culture it was actually inappropriate for a young woman to be on the streets alone. Plus, they were considered as property of their father…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Absolutely.

Hmmm. I do want more accountability in my work. I don’t follow a traditional outline in the WIP I decided to focus on for the Summer, but I can get a Chapter/Word outline thingy put together, if that’s wanted.

I am working at a church/Bible college campground for the Summer though, so hours and stuff are gonna be weird. But at the same time, I…[Read more]

I’ll see if I have time. I have rowing to do, plus I’m looking into getting a job this summer as well as taking the first steps to getting my driver’s permit since I’m turning 16 end of July and would like to get my permit as soon as possible. If I have time, I’d be interested!

Not sure what I’d write yet though…

@jonas

This sounds like a cool idea. I don’t write very orthodox, so I won’t have an outline. (just character outlines). I’m also not sure if I’m sharing my current novels on line for marketing purposes. (They’ll be releasing this summer, starting with the first one later this month)

But I’d sure be willing to breathe down anyone’s neck who…[Read more]

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NEXT SECTION!!!

Two days later, Leon was walking home from visiting the Krügers in the late evening. He was nearly home when someone called out, “You there, what’s your business?”

Leon turned around and saw a young soldier lean…

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@esther-c

Hiiii Esther! I just saw this!!!
I have a critique for Easton’s character arc.

You’ve been having him do all these things for Tyler, and having him trying to encourage Tyler.

Do you mean to have him come off as kind of distant and cold? like Shadow said, he feels really impersonal.

What I mean is, in your book are you trying to show…[Read more]