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Hope Ann replied to the topic Titles…again in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 10 years, 3 months ago
Good idea, @daeus Annnnnd, I’m going to do it here just because.
What’s one word that describes your protagonist? Unbowed
What’s one word that describes your antagonist? Vengeful
What’s your protagonist’s lie? He must win on his own
Do you have any repeated phrases throughout the story? Not quotable ones
What swings the tide at the climax?…[Read more]
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Hope Ann replied to the topic Titles…again in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 10 years, 3 months ago
@anna-brie I know…those ones aren’t very good. But nothing is clicking.
@gretald The problem with Legend of the Shield was that I discovered it was actually the title of some comic series. 😉 And nothing just seems to be snapping. And the way my book’s theme has changed, The Final Clash really doesn’t fit anymore.
That’s a good point, @kate-fl…[Read more]
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Hope Ann replied to the topic Titles…again in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 10 years, 3 months ago
@anna-brie I know…those ones aren’t very good. But nothing is clicking.
@gretald The problem with Legend of the Shield was that I discovered it was actually the title of some comic series. 😉 And nothing just seems to be snapping. And the way my book’s theme has changed, The Final Clash really doesn’t fit anymore.
That’s a good point, @kate-fl…[Read more]
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Hope Ann started the topic Titles…again in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 10 years, 3 months ago
There’s a lot of truth to a quote I once saw, at least in my own life: One either gets a title right the first time, or they spend weeks or months agonizing over it. Or, in my case, years.
So, there’s this book I’m working on. Originally it was called Legend of the Shield, then The Shield and Spear. It’s most recent title is The Final Clash. I’m…[Read more]
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Hope Ann replied to the topic Animal Farm in the forum Book Discussions 10 years, 3 months ago
I find the ‘media side’ of the story interesting. The twisting of the story about different farmers and Snowball to make sure there is always someone everyone is upset with. Since the animals are given someone to blame, they don’t look closer to home at the real reason of their trials. And, through all the stories told about all the ‘enemies’ of…[Read more]
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Hope Ann replied to the topic And the Moral to THAT is… in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 3 months ago
Or you can write short novellas on characters or give extra scenes or secret pages to those who have read your books and/or joined your newsletter. 😉
As for yelling, you must also use your mouth. And your hands cupped around your mouth. The mountain tops are best for getting your voice spread the furthers, or so I’ve heard. But since there are…[Read more]
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Hope Ann replied to the topic And the Moral to THAT is… in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 3 months ago
I agree, though it is sad. That’s the problem I have with one of my WIPs (Scarlet Rose). I’ve too many subplots, some of which don’t really have to do with the main plot. And I’m going to have to go though and trim plenty of parts and figure out what to focus on and what to just let be part of a character.
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Hope Ann replied to the topic Where do you live? in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 3 months ago
@bluejay Nope, no state animal. I think states can have an animal if they want, but Indiana doesn’t have one.
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Hope Ann replied to the topic Where do you live? in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 3 months ago
@Bluejay Yes, Indiana! We have a state bird, the Cardinal. Our state flower is the Peony and our state tree is the Tulip Tree. We call ourselves Hoosiers…I’m not sure on the background of that name though.
Basketball is a big sport here; not that I’ve ever been interested. Also, there is the NASCAR 500 race down in Indianapolis. Also in…[Read more]
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Hope Ann replied to the topic Bible Verse on Writing…and inspirational quotes in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 3 months ago
Ecclesiastes is a fascinating book. 😉 I like that verse, @kate-flournoy.
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Hope Ann replied to the topic Fantasy parallel dimensions in the forum Fantasy 10 years, 3 months ago
@writefury The Tangible might work.
And I like the idea of Silence too, @kate-flournoy. Or Rigid.
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Hope Ann replied to the topic The (Awesome) Summer Writing Club! in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 3 months ago
My summer project is a novella retelling Hansel and Gretel. I’m still in the planning stages though I’m hoping to get an outline figured out in the next week or so.
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Hope Ann replied to the topic W.I.P. Lounge Club (Writers Only!) in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 3 months ago
That’s pretty funny, @bluejay. 🙂
@overcomer Yes, dragons are fun. I like looking at snakes for facial inspiration. But mainly I look up pictures on pinterest or google. I’ve never tried getting enough details down to draw one though. But I did write an article last month about dragons which might give you some ideas. 🙂 You can read it here.
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Hope Ann replied to the topic Summit in the forum Publishing & Platform 10 years, 3 months ago
Thanks! No, I didn’t know about that.
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Hope Ann started the topic Fantasy parallel dimensions in the forum Fantasy 10 years, 4 months ago
I need a little name help in a story I’m writing. It’s a fantasy, but it has a parallel dimension which is somewhat like a spiritual realm and also a music realm. Anyway, I call that ‘realm’ the Melody or Reflection. But I’m trying to figure out a neat name for the real world without just calling it ‘real world’. I’ve been calling it Stable, but I…[Read more]
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Hope Ann started the topic Bible Verse on Writing…and inspirational quotes in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 4 months ago
I’m planning of making up a new e-mail for writing stuff…and that’s not really important, but in my current e-mail I have my favorite verse as part of my signature. I wanted to do something similar in my writing e-mail but am not sure what verse I to do. I want it somewhat writing related. Do any of you guys have a favorite Bible verses which…[Read more]
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Hope Ann started the topic Bible Verse on Writing…and inspirational quotes in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 4 months ago
I’m planning of making up a new e-mail for writing stuff…and that’s not really important, but in my current e-mail I have my favorite verse as part of my signature. I wanted to do something similar in my writing e-mail but am not sure what verse I to do. I want it somewhat writing related. Do any of you guys had a favorite Bible verses which…[Read more]
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Hope Ann started the topic Bible Verse on Writing…and inspirational quotes in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 4 months ago
I’m planning of making up a new e-mail for writing stuff…and that’s not really important, but in my current e-mail I have my favorite verse as part of my signature. I wanted to do something similar in my writing e-mail and was wondering if you guys had any favorite Bible verses which could relate to writing. Or if you had any favorite writing quotes.
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Hope Ann replied to the topic Tragedy Befalls All Great Writers in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 4 months ago
@Hannah-C I’m so sorry. I think losing a story is even worse than getting rejected. That happened to me once; well, I’d backed-up fairly regularly so I only lost a few chapters but still…it was several days worth of work. And I discovered several other things I’d lost in the computer crash weeks or months later when I went looking for them. ;( I…[Read more]
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Hope Ann replied to the topic Titles are going to be the death of me… in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 10 years, 4 months ago
@Emma-Flournoy, @kate-Flournoy *sits back and watches conversation with relish* I love it when sisters act like Joy and I.
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