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@winter-rose I love the updated one

I think there needs to be something more connecting the first sentence with the second, though.

It would work great early on to have

Another bodyguard would give anything to protect a lady from the Slate family.

BUT Cocky Rook Warren is afraid of girls, or at least that’s what his fellow bodyguards a…

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@inkling-for-christ  Everything that the course teaches about showing and the techniques to use it more effectively, for example, body language, can be transferred into first person just by changing what the character says, for example

“I walked down the hall slowly, feeling nervous (telling)

would change to

“I shuffled down the hall, my hands…[Read more]

@mariposa *blinks* Stop torturing me.

@inkling-for-christ

😀 I got the same email

Stan and I got the course, too

I’m really liking it so far

I’ve watched about half of Part 1

All I can say is, @daeus thanks for making such a good learning tool available for free, and great job

@winter-rose XD This sounds really funny

I’m guessing Rook is actually an alternate version of Sam, from another dimension?

I don’t have much experience with blurbs, but I like this one. It seems slightly long, like the others are saying.

“A different bodyguard would give anything to protect a member of the Slate family.

Not Rook. Not if his…

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@gabbyj *hands you hot chocolate* Worry not. I know my close relatives can get out of hand sometimes. 😛

@theacornman I love your signature. XD

@mariposa This is epic. 😀 XD Love the frogs. And my fire.

The only thing I don’t like about it is that you’re making me hungry.

@alia Well, you’re right, a lot of it was a copy… but for some reason they played it in a way that seemed fresh to me. Although, I will say, the characters were definitely a stronger point than the plot

I think it would have been great for Rey to turn to the dark side, too 😀

That moment when Kylo says “Let’s leave everything behind. Snoke,…[Read more]

@shannon Yep, I play guitar… more like I’m learning it right now

I can’t play super fast fingering

🙂 That’s another good idea. If I have enough time, I might try to that at some point.

@aislinn-mollisong XD XD @dekreel You’re right. That does sound like an awesome first line 😀 I wouldn’t be so sure you can’t write songs @aislinn-mollisong…[Read more]

@catwing … that would make sense. And you’re right, the laws of physics and order are completely different there, in some ways

@lady-iliara 😀 Thanks! I’m glad

@christi-eaton  I just watched the Wingfeather Saga short film last night! It was cool! I liked Peet X)

I loved he part where it was sparkling everywhere when Leeli started singing, and the fang was like blown away. That was AWESOME! So well done!

Oh yeah, I agree with @waterlily about the footnotes. HILARIOUS XD

@mariposa  Wow. That’s…. awesomeist thing… yeah, @kate-flournoy, you and me both

@dekreel I joined August 2016ish. So I guess a year and a half now. Though it feels like an eternity. I’ve been writing for 3 and 1/2 years. Maybe 4… *shrug*

@winter-rose I know! I was looking through those ancient posts…time travel can exist, can’t it. XD

(not writing yet)

@dragon-snapper  Yep, that’s the one I found! For some reason I expected it to be two or three years ago, but I guess you weren’t on KP yet… How long have you been on KP?

(BTW I’m not writing. Yet…)

DRAGON SNAPPER’S CHAIR 1

@Dekreel @winter-rose Anyone else wondering. Man this was a long time ago. Back then I melted chairs too.

@aislinn-mollisong  @winter-rose  I seem to have gotten distracted looking through the archives… I’m looking for the first time @dragon-snapper has melted a chair. She says it was in Writer’s Corner #2, so I’m checking it out…

Anyway, happy writing!

@winter-rose  That’s more of an outside motivation than an inside inspiration, I suppose 🙂

Is it an article for KP?