@perfectfifths
Active 7 years, 5 months ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #16 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
@alia And I had to take a break as well, because…housework. 🙂 I got to start reorganizing our library; fun stuff. 😛
But now, it’s my day to go see Newsies! So I have about half an hour and then I’ve got to get ready to go.
Are you still here? How’s it going now?
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writing Prompts in the forum Art 8 years, 4 months ago
@catwing You know what? This one’s for you:
Threatening voice: “You never know until you find out. And finding out can be very dangerous.”
Timid voice: “Could it kill you?”
Threatening voice: “It could. That is within the realm of possibility.”
Timid voice: “By the way…what exactly is it that you never know, again?”
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #16 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
@alia My characters usually have a little bit of me in them, and a little bit of my brother, my sister, or my friend, or a random person I meet on the street. 🙂 But this particular character she was talking about actually has several very similar character traits to me, which are pretty obvious to my siblings when they read the story. I us…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #16 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
@alia Aaand, I’m back. 😛
Oh, that’s wonderful. 🙂 It’s amazing to realize that I have the power to save the lives of fictional people in a fictional world which exists at present only in the mind of a girl who lives quite far away from me, and whom I’ve never met.
*sits back and contemplates my impact on society* – that is – fictional…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #16 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
@valtmy My problem isn’t infodumps as much as it is “bridge” sections. I don’t know if there’s an actual name for them, but they’re the parts where you go down in between the exciting passages and have to get the characters from one place to another. There are things that have to happen in between, so I can’t just skip the bridge and go on to t…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #16 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
@valtmy Really? If you figure that out, will you please let me know the secret?! I’m working on an annoyingly boring passage myself. 😉
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #16 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
@ariel-ashira Goodbye! 🙁
@valtmy Oh, okay. SeekJustice is in Australia, about sixteen hours ahead of me. Usually I stay up really late and talk with her at about 11:00-2:00 a.m. while it’s only lunch time for her. 😛 What are you working on right now?
@alia Hello! How’s it going? (I’m on and off right now too, since I’m watching my litt…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #16 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
@valtmy That’s okay, but…what?! Where do you live?
@ariel-ashira I’m going to be off and on, since I’ve got to watch my little sisters while my mom is out of the house. So my replies might be slow or quick depending on what’s going on.
How’s it going? Working on your biblical story?
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #16 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
@ariel-ashira If you were here for only a few seconds I may have missed you, but if not, hello!
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #16 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
@ariel-ashira Well, I’m here for a little while, and it is morning, so are you on now? 😉
@seekjustice Oh, okay. 🙂 Haha, nope. Don’t follow that advice. You might end up dying, don’t you think?
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #16 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
Oh I’ve actually seen that skit before!! It’s hilarious 🙂 obviously they aren’t great at dating advice.
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #16 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
@seekjustice Hm. Yes, I should go to bed. 😀
Okay, see you tomorrow hopefully! And I’ll keep praying for your arms.
Goodnight.
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #16 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
Okay 🙂
Well, I’ll disappear and then you can go back to Chara or to bed, you know, because its past two for you!
Not really but hopefully they’ll be mostly better soon.
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #16 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
@seekjustice Do that, and let me know what you think. 🙂 I was actually introduced to Studio C through KP myself, so I guess I’m passing it on. 😛
Chara’s doing okay, but I’ve been getting distracted looking up a certain Richard of England…
I’m going to do a bit more writing and then sign off too. Are your arms feeling any better?
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #16 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
Oh cool 🙂 I’ll make sure to have a look later. I’m probably going to have to go soonish though.
How’s Chara doing?
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #16 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
@seekjustice Yup! 😀
They’re a Mormon comedy group based out of BYU, so most of their sketches are clean. I really hate that they include magic, Harry Potter, and stuff like that in some of their sketches, but for the most part they’ve got good, family comedy.
Here’s the sketch I was talking about.
And here’s another sketch, just in case…[Read more]
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #16 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
We just enjoying debating for the sake of it 😛
No, I don’t think I’ve ever seen any of their videos.
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #16 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
@seekjustice Yes, totally. I was just trying to think of any possible arguments for the side I chose. If I was arguing against Richard, I’d think up really good arguments for that side instead. 😛
Haha! I’m only “contemplating” the story at all! I doubt it’ll ever get written. I’ve planned the premises for probably two hundred stories and…[Read more]
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #16 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
I think there is somewhat of a difference between teemaged rebellion and…you know a historical event called The Great Revolt. Like swords and murder. Just saying.
He did, however, knight his cook and that made me laugh. So there’s that 😛
And I’m Australian, we have an inbuilt suspicion of authority. Especially authority that…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #16 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
@seekjustice A great many kids revolt against their own fathers during their growing up years. It is only with the sons of kings that it has such great consequences. 😛 (I am not in any way excusing rebellion against parents. I am simply stating the fact that Richard wasn’t a whole lot different from a normal person.)
One thing I have to say a…[Read more]
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